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Posted:2014-12-27 15:56
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Posted on 27 December 2014, 15:56 UTC by dfsfegef3d PM
Uploader Comment
English translation o Yuri no Kimochi (latter part)
I didn't translated fx sounds and many screaming.

Is a
rough translation,
rough letter-putting as well though,
"better than nothing."
so please enjoy it.
Posted on 27 December 2014, 17:10 UTC by ThunderKurono PM
Score +93
I have the feeling that team Duwang translated it and the lead translator was Chaika.
Base +7, Drops of Honey +5, bobneil +6, Beane +7, BFBK +4, Neopheonix0 +6, TB808 +7, CantThinkOfaName. +6, fijin +6, paladin90 +6, qazzy5 +21, izayaxp +8, Dunlehoff +4
Posted on 27 December 2014, 17:14 UTC by Exsteverbur PM
Score +155
super spicy but this is very questionable

"better than nothing" is a really shitty attitude to have it straight up says "well i tried you don't have a reason to be mad"

2/10
Base +7, wavedash +11, johnnytrone +5, fadefade +16, BFBK +4, Neopheonix0 +6, HallowedAtrain +5, TB808 +7, crazymagic +11, Granten +7, reallycoolname +4, JukanX +15, as102 +9, and 7 more...
Posted on 27 December 2014, 17:18 UTC by koRenA PM
Score -3
Pls give me Korean version now...
I want
Base +1, rainbowkouji -4
Posted on 27 December 2014, 17:30 UTC by dfsfegef3d PM
Score -12
//Exsteverbur

Go straight PLEASE.
so What are you saying?
"you don't think better than nothing, but you think nothing is better if the quality doesn't sound" ?
if this is your opinion and many agree on that, I will obey the majority and better stop english translation from now on.

thanks.
Base +1, Taka at work -6, codyman1234 -4, Dokiliny -3
Posted on 27 December 2014, 17:59 UTC by blockade PM
Score +73
I think Exstevebur is just stating the obvious.
It's pretty shoddy work.

Nobody who does shoddy work should ever expect to be praised for it.
(unless it's fine art paintings that don't look like anything but cost thousands)

The translation is bad, though the worst part is how little effort is put into making the whole thing presentable.
Like giving away half a shirt.
It's better than nothing, but it shouldn't be applauded.
Base +8, Beane +7, johnnytrone +5, fadefade +16, BFBK +4, Neopheonix0 +6, TB808 +7, dante1016996 +6, Taka at work +6, xerorushbluh +5, Dokiliny +3
Posted on 27 December 2014, 18:31 UTC by dfsfegef3d PM
Score +7
//blockade or anybody
I see thanks.
I didnt put any effort in the art work really as you said. This is my pilot uploading to know how my translation is being accepted to the english natives since I am a japanese and korean native speaker. So the art work can be enhanced but the translation can hardly be.
And you said the translation was bad.
So here again I want to ask you only in terms of the translation if it was acceptable or not or just completely shit.

Am asking this coz still I want to upload english translations but again I dont want to upload it even ignoring the major readers' bad feelings.
Thanks
Base +1, CantThinkOfaName. +6
Posted on 27 December 2014, 18:50 UTC by MattUzumaki PM
Score +1
This release gave me cancer. RIP.
Base +8, TB808 -7
Posted on 27 December 2014, 21:22 UTC by Acerola PM
Score +16
@dfsfegef3d

As a translated product, it definitely doesn't pass. It's not completely shit but it's not something you'd want to show-off or present with confidence. There are many obvious cases where the script sounds strange and awkward. There's also some questionable text alignment that makes the work appear shoddy.

For example on pg.10: "I've been completely wrecked"
No one says that. Like, no one

Next time, just PM some editors or English natives for feedback on the script. I'm sure someone would gladly oblige.

@@dfsfegef3d
Np. I appreciate the fact that you're actually taking the reader's feelings into account. Remember to ask others for help if you're unsure.
Last edited on 28 December 2014, 00:29 UTC.
Base +10, Taka at work +6
Posted on 27 December 2014, 23:17 UTC by FreeMan1231 PM
Score +7
please first part too
Base +7
Posted on 28 December 2014, 00:00 UTC by dfsfegef3d PM
Score +13
//acerola
Th
anks. Your comment was what I exactly needed. I Will stop english transcription uploads until I reach certain level.
Now I wish this crap to be expunged too.

//freeman1231
The raw is below but no english edition exists at the moment.
http://dl.hentaiknight.work/e-hentai/g/769842/1df57ab434/
Base +1, CantThinkOfaName. +6, EchoHolic +6
Posted on 28 December 2014, 02:31 UTC by The Escapist PM
Score +14
I feel that the editing struck me harder than the translations.
Base +6, GGS +8
Posted on 28 December 2014, 04:36 UTC by triopsate PM
Score +6
Eh it's readable if you get used to reading GT'd webnovels like me... I guess that's one of the benefits for being unable to wait for translator releases and running off to read the google translated raws of webnovels. You can more or less piece together everything and convert it into a more fluent version in your mind without even realizing it xD
Base +6
Posted on 28 December 2014, 13:07 UTC by oneiwonder PM
Score +12
@dfsfegef3d

Hey there I don't know if you know about the forums but you can go over there to get some help or if you would like I could help you with some of the editing and english script.

Like acerola said its not great but with some practice and a little bit of help you could be very good. So don't stop just get someone to help before your next upload. It is really great of you to ask for feed back and really care about how feel about your work so keep at it!
Last edited on 30 December 2014, 12:59 UTC.
Base +6, Taka at work +6
Posted on 30 December 2014, 06:17 UTC by dfsfegef3d PM
Score +1
@oneiwonder

thanks for the cheerful comment.
I want to know then
how can I share files with others or what forum should I go...
could you please share the links?
or If you are going to kinldy help me, show me the way to contact you. thank you.
Base +1
Posted on 30 December 2014, 13:06 UTC by oneiwonder PM
Score +6
@dfsfegef3d

here are the forums. you can look around and find some threads that can help you there.
https://bc.vc/m0ncUJ

and go here and click "Send a Personal Message" and we can talk more about me helping you there
http://zip-share.vy1.me/
Base +6
Posted on 03 January 2015, 21:38 UTC by nasd90 PM
Score +6
Well, the last page was funny as hell, it would have been better in raw IMO. Now it's like a crack-induced comedy, like that classic saying he had on the last page "what a fucking great".
Base +6
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