Original by Honnou to Yokubou no Gyuutan
Artist: Yorisuke & Raidon

Translation by farfallavendetta

I do not own this doujinshi copyright belongs to the creators!

If there is any mistake in the translated text dont hesitate to tell me.

Criticism is welcome.

Happy Fapping

way to ruin a good doujin with useless watermark on every page

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Thanks for the translation. You said you wanted feedback. Couple things. Why use the watermarked version? Non watermarked version here http://g.e-hentai/g/624224/149a00766f/ . The font is a little big for some bubbles. The goal it's to not have text touch the wall of the bubble. I'd suggest shrinking it a bit. Please try not to put single letters if they are part of another word on thier own line ( page 3 That's). Grammar is also quite rough in places. I'm guessing english it's not your first language. You would very likely be greatly helped by running your scripts through a proofreader. Lastly, please don't use * for sfx like the coughing on page 9. Usually you just use another font, or just use bold.Other then those points good attempt.

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So you choose to complain about the watermarks but not the textual errors? The watermarks hardly interfere with anything...they're at the bottom left of the pages.

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Thanks for the feedback, im already working on the non watermarked version, actually i realized it when walter mentioned it-.-
Im gonna fix some minor stuff and upload a new version in the next 1-2 days

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Aww, the cover looks like Christmas with all the pretty colors.

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I always have a hard time enjoying these Shingeki no Kyojin doujins, mostly because they rarely do the source material any justice, in this instance the MOE-fication of the characters causes too much of a departure to associate it with SnK.

That said it's still good for what it is, good art depicting good sex scenes.

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A NICE AND HOT DOUJIN

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Fucking finally a new translated non BL AoT doujin. I really dont understand why there is so many yaoi doujins for this series.

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A non-yaoi SnK doujin? Is this real life?

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I always ask this question because most of this series are doujin yaoi and the few straight if you can say are Ntr?

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Rubbing the outside of the anus is a military technique!

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