Huh. Diggin' it.

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While I like the concept: YOUR A FUCKING COCK TEASE, STOP IT ALREADY AND GIVES US SEX SCENES!!
Well the sex scenes where short and borderline pg13 2/5 stars.

Last edited on 27 October 2014, 15:44 UTC.

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How can a CELL HAVE DIABETES. Its a cell, thats about as small as you are gonna get.

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This isnt that sexual. This deserves a Non-h rating.

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I hope my circulatory system's components are more focused on moving oxygen and nutrients around and killing anything that isn't me than on flirting and generating drama.

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This is fucking stupid and I hate the artist.

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Seems okay, but this seems like something the author is going to milk for far too long. 3 chapters in and we can tell that the real "Problem" hasn't even presented itself yet.

No it doesn't have to be extremely short like 5 or 6 chapters, but for the story that's trying to be told, it doesn't need 20+ chapters.

Few things that irk me. Seems like English doesn't seem to be the first language and little tiny things like 'Florida' instead of something like 'Fingers' or 'Fallopian Tubes' or something to keep consistent with the Osmosis world...(Lore? don't think the movie and series was enough to warrant the term Lore.) However I can understand a little how you'd want to just tell a story and not have to look up 40 clinical terms to use that'd explain what kind of cells/viruses characters are just to write one chapter. However without a little of this the story just seems like any old law enforcement drama with the 'Osmosis' genre attached as an afterthought.

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Seems more like a personal fantasy story with the osmosis twist added. The Cells Smoke which makes no sense unless the Person they Inhabit does too. I dunno didnt make it that far. I liked Osmosis Jones which is why started the read, but dont like how you're handling the "Continuity" i guess...? Did they have smoker Cells in the Movie? TV show maybe? been a while.

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disturbing stuff here...................

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I like the story, it's your idea after all, so do what you wish with it. To me because its different it's cool. It flows in its own way, the art is not bad, and the characters are a bit....well some are plane with no soul. They seem to be conflicting a bit to themselves. I guess its because there are only 3 chapters but I personally barely care for some of them. I can't wait to read more though it has allot of potential to me.

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There is just something funky about cells having diabetes and wanting to use condoms for fear of being "infected". . .by having sex with a virus. Story is an interesting concept at least.

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Yeah, this is some girls oc fanfic.

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Reminds me of the time I trolled FurAffinity by making Jill, my HIV fursona. She liked sodomy and gays, but disliked condoms and white knights. That was 10 years ago.

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People who hate this are.......wait for it!!! Germaphobes!!!

(crickets chirping)

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Still waiting for that 'Phimosis Jones' parody.

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Wait I know! It's not regular diabetes, it's SUBATOMIC DIABETES!

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I'm really really really tired to see this always on front page

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