This reads like a bad machine translation.

Edit: poor grammar tag

1. page 05: "Now from Rittsu with karaoke to go however, together won't you go? -> Rittsu and I are going to karaoke now. Won't you join us?
2. page 05: "I will karaoke refuse reason is not likely" -> I wouldn't turn down a chance to karaoke.
3. page 06: "Sorry... as I thought today also is impossible I guess" -> Sorry... I guess it will be impossible again today.
4. page 06: "Good after school Candy, Today rely on, faggot!" -> Good after school, Candy. I'm here to challenge you again today. (He actually says "Good after school" in the original japanese but the 'faggot' part is completely wrong)
5. page 06: "Still irresponsible how about give up? To atashi is in anycase won't win is why, sah" -> Why don't you just give up already? You can't win against me anyway. (There's no reason to leave the japanese in there)
6. page 06: "Today for sure will win that notic-...!" -> I have a feeling that I can win today...! (I don't know what sensualaoi is trying to say here so I'll just write it how I would have translated it)
7. page 06: "Today is karaoke going?" -> I'm going to karaoke today! (Besides the poor grammar it is a mistranslation)
8. page 06: "Da-ne, recently everyday been coming seems to be the reason, ne..." -> uh-huh, lately it seems he's been coming here everyday... (Again, no reason to leave the japanese particles in)
9. page 07: "I and 1 on 1 with game, won't you give me?" -> Will you have a 1on1 game with me?
10. page 07: "Heey, in this way because" -> Come on, I'm begging you (Poor translation as much as it is poor grammar)
11. page 07: "Well then, me karaoke go because, ne" -> Well then, I'm going to karaoke now
12. page 07: "Ah, that's two people together...?" -> Huh, where'd they go...? (Poor translation)
13. page 07: "Eh, when say boyfriend you mean he was once in the same grade?" -> Eh, he used to be a classmate of hers? (Mistranslation and poor grammar)
14. page 07: "Yep, that's what I heard, yo" -> Yep, that's what I heard (No reason to leave the 'yo' in there)

Not a complete list, just enough to justify the tag.

Last edited on 31 October 2014, 12:01 UTC.

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Woot! One of Greone's works got translated!
...
...Oh.. Oh no..

Last edited on 31 October 2014, 11:10 UTC.

Base +6, Luke78 +9, Kisses +6, Danjian +6, tmasakado +5, qazzy5 +21, Xion Rabbit +5, Elementxj +6, krim1 +6, chero666 +6, harutoshi +10, atomicpuppy +23, anonymus774 +7, and 6 more...

The "(unicode heart)" thingies made me laugh more than they should have, but sadly the translation itself is really bad.

Base +14, Kisses +6, D u b b y +9, Luke78 +9, bangayo +6, Anonyslime +7, no_one_11 +6, masamunemaniac +21

Interviewing for Laruffii?

Base +10, tmasakado +5, Luke78 +9, boodle +6, DarthGouf +2, Cazdli +7, karambula +3, mrwayne +9, chero666 +6, Amphion +6, bananafairy +2

However is no interest in [kemonodesuga] fetish of the paraphilia it is grateful for translation. Because entertainment carries out and it is w and hopeful for better effort in the future.

@Dammon, Nomake Wan: Pretty much. Thanks for your time.

Base +27, Onthorm +7, Luke78 -9

This translate hurt my brain

Base +7, Xion Rabbit +5, Lokarash +5, Luke78 +9, prinnymask +2

Damn it, now i want a good translation for this.

Base +6, Xion Rabbit +5, Luke78 +9, prinnymask +2

*Sees new Greone Doujin Translated*

YAY! Another cute furry doujin!

*Sees the Nasty Translation*

.... Feh, I think the raws were easier to read. And I can't read Kanji....

Base +10, Xion Rabbit +5, Luke78 +9, prinnymask +2, Nesray -7

Did the translator used google translate and copy pasted!?

Base +6, Luke78 +9, prinnymask +2

This better be labeled as a machine translations...

Anyone who proofread this would know this is NOT how people speak with one another.

Base +7, BFBK +4, Luke78 +9, prinnymask +2

Alright, fuck this. Someone tell me who I can look for to commission this. Most of them do not want to do furry works.

Base +5, Luke78 +9, prinnymask +2, anonymus774 +7

Sensulaoi likes to troll from time to time.

Base +5, METALhawk +10, Larvaska +4, D u b b y +9, Luke78 +9, anonymus774 +7, holy_demon +23, Ser Maggot +11, Nesray +7

https://www.doujinshi.org/book/694676/1-on-Wan(Digital-Editioin)/

Base +21, Majorfoxy +4

@Figz
go to IRC (this is a web interface if you dont want to download a client https://shink.me/XsARn)
server irc.Rizon.net
Channel #Kemonono
There are furry translators there.

Base +6

"Note of Translation: He uses the faggot particle 'wa' to indicate he is faggot." My fucking sides; this is so bad.

Last edited on 31 October 2014, 22:35 UTC.

Base +6, floobadeedoo +6, Crystalium +8, Majorfoxy +4, altereggo +17, atomicpuppy +23, anonymus774 +7, bananafairy +2, kaidar +7, bahki +6

Who translated this, Google?

Base +6, Majorfoxy +4, prinnymask +2, caos719 +7, kaidar +7

I would like to read this.
But my englisch seems insufficent @.@
Someone able to make sense out of it?

Base +7

I was unaware the japanese language had a "faggot particle". How progressive!

Base +6, anonymus774 +7, geemer +5, bananafairy +2

HEY this guy put effort on it~ GUYS he is better then me at least or did i fail to notice the complimentary said above

Base +6

I read maybe the half of this "things" and realy tried to understand.
And I stoped... Approximately when I felt my brain melting...

So, at first I was:
Fuck yeah, a new greone
but then I was:
warglabglabglab<====lack of brain cells

Base +6

I really wanted to like this, but the translation is SO awful. Just not ready for Prime Time. 1-1/2 *.

Base +6, bananafairy +2

Ah... I don't really get all the hate crunchyroll gets, honestly... Most of the time, they are doing an OK job, considering the small price for a streaming service and the amount of shows they deliver.
Besides, where are the alternatives for legal simulcasted anime streaming?

sensualaoi - if you really think you can do a better job then they currently do, how about sending in a real application and eventually getting money for what you do?

Base +6

Looks like goatie came back with a new account.

Base +28

This translation is really something else.

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