虐心本，萎了

Base +8, RJackPot +13, HenryTW +6

This isn't C86 if it's uncensored, not to mention the afterword being Chinese.

Edit: (vote down "translated")

Base +11, Alicia Florence +36, wavedash +8

This version is FF24 version, Japanese version will be sold in C86.

Base +7, Alicia Florence +36, wavedash +8, bb50123 +19

Could someone explain what's been said from page 16 onwards thank you.

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So, Hiten's been drawing pretty much only vanilla to this point, and now BAM! NTR out of fucking nowhere. A shame, because the art is amazing.

@LuxraysEmbrace I guess guy's been mindbroken after his girlfriend got made into cockhungry slut.

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Page 17: has a ring
Page 18: no ring

After she seems as if nothing happened.

So is this full ntr o rape that broke them apart?

I would like to know the dialogues from the last two pages because the ending is confusing.

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妈蛋，砍死作者

Base +6, HenryTW +6, QQBoxy -3, Fall.Angel +2

This version claims to be "from" Comiket 86. However, C86 has yet to occur. The proper label for this doujinshi is the convention that it was FIRST RELEASED and not just any convention tag.

However, this summer, there has been a number of doujinshi appearing at e-hentai with the label C86 when it came from a different convention that was a month prior to C86. Sure, putting a C86 in the filename may get people to download it more (and thus more gallery download credits), but this is a deceptive tactic.

Base +11, wavedash +8, moonjog +5

提 督 激 怒

內 戰 不 可 避

Base +7, SENTINAL_1080 +5, HenryTW +6, RJackPot +13, QQBoxy -3, fx-happy +5, Maximum+1s +2, lhnewid +5

作者續集不是HE就燒他全家

Base +6, QQBoxy -3, ddvdv123 +3, Fall.Angel +2, qq666qq -6

NTR超赞的哦哦哦哦哦哦

Edit: Shoukaku's memory and level are deleted at page 16

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怎么连飞天都开始画NTR了，这是逼人给他寄刀片啊
@LuxraysEmbrace Pg.16 The old guy had shoukaku take secret drugs that would reset her memory and level, and shoukaku were begging for his stoping.
@Wilfriback Pg.18 and Pg.19 happened after shoukaku's memory had been reset.
Pg.18 Shoukaku: Teitoku you could leave now. (Apparently she had been tamed by the old guy and followed his order) Teitoku: What happend to your ring. Shoukaku: Ah, the ring is right here, right?...
Pg.19 Shoukaku: Ah, I'm so stupid. I forgot that I'm not qualified (her level) to marry teitoku...

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被药物强制搞的，还可以接受。如果真是被大吊征服的我才要杀了作者。

Base +6, RJackPot +13, QQBoxy -3, lhnewid +5, qq666qq -6

@half2
那啥，其实是强上完以后再喂药的，过程中翔鹤已经说“想要大雕”了...快去杀了作者吧

Base +6, wppfcd +6, QQBoxy -3, 夜雨倾城 +5, lhnewid +5

Again, an original Chinese version. Stop voting "translated".

Base +22, bb50123 +19, QQBoxy +3, ffn +7, Blool +1, Maximum+1s +2

@Wilfriback
I found I misread shoukaku's words at the bottom of Pg.19, she said "I forgot that I'm not qualified (her level) to marry 'taishyou' (probably the old guy)", which means she had been completely brainwashed.

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虽然画的很棒，不过这剧情好虐 太太我喜欢你啊

Base +5

我不觉得……其实有一部分提督的心态都是这样的。

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@Frizen007
那确实有点说不过去了，才用嘴吃了一回就想要了，饥渴程度不敢想象。

Base +6

噢噢噢噢，超好评！！！

Base +2

@avfun
淫梦厨suki

Base +23, fx-happy +5

...虽然画的很赞,但是差点哭了QAQ

Base +17

还真是虐啊。这个还是希望能有续集

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qwq好虐啊啊即使是hiten大人啊啊啊

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