That was decent. My only issue was that there were WAY TOO MANY WORDS. Now, don't get me wrong, trying to weave a story into these things is fine (I actually enjoy it when hentai comics do that), it's just that the first 10 pages were essentially Walls Of Text.

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@Kingkaor I understand where you're getting at, but I actually prefer a story/comic/hentai that let's you get a little taste of the art style and feel the power of the story. In my opinion, this doesn't need hentai to be an acceptable story. For example, Better late than never, it doesn't give as ma y H-scenes but its still a loving comic for its powerful storytelling.

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Better Late then Never was fucking terrible.

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This is how starfox should end but who the hell is Lucy? sounds like Fox and Lucy had something together.

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Krystal breast look sometime different in the comic when she took the shirt off it D-cup but when sit in water with Fox then it look like C-cup so confusing

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@stllchlln Lucy is Peppy's daughter. this comic is taking place after one of the endings in Starfox Command where the team decides to disband and live their lives as described in teh first part.

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I LOVED the comic, and I'm waiting to see what's coming next.

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