I hope you're going to finish this series. It wad started over a year ago and only 2 chapters were done.
http://g.e-hentai/g/541574/9f41084171/

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Seem like it's been awhile, so I hope you'll finish translating this series.

Take your time, we all want quality translations. Thanks

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We have been commissioned to do the entire story, yes.

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Just putting it out there, Ch. 1-2 were already translated. Seeing as you've been commissioned to do it all I guess it doesn't matter. So this is great. We can never get enough Sanbun.

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Thanks for picking this up "ragdoll", now i don't have to worry about it being poorly translated! ^_^

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Thank you so much for doing this, both commissioners and team ragged! For a while there I thought we were doomed to not get this particular Sanbun gem.

EDIT: Now that it's all done, I'm going to say my piece on it as well. Like @Alexandar I feel like Sanbun tried to cater to both happy end lovers and hardcore NTR fans, and failed both sides in the attempt. The happy end people have trouble seeing it as a real happy ending given the ultimate loss by Mana that was just hand-waived away (and may eventually fail if she ever gets tempted by another). The NTR people are unsatisfied because the fat dude didn't ultimately prevail and get his controlling dominance.

I do feel like an epilogue where the fat dude makes her his would improve the ending here. Right now it's caught between two endings and has neither the warmth nor the bite that either would need to really succeed.

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One thing that always gets me in SK manga/doujins is that there's always that immediate giveaway of who the bad people are because they just look evil, but nobody else seems to get it.

Does provide a bit of comedy though, so that's good.

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I'm not sure if you know this but the tankobon had an extra scene in the last chapter, so you should use it as your raw, unfortunately the only version of it here is the chinese one but take a look if you want.
http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/g/697570/059acaa6dd/

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Well, another work from Sanbun getting translated, what can I say?

5 stars and Thx, thx a lot!!

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Really sanbun hypnosis ?　- Master of Netorare he could have easily broke them into mindless slaves with more plot this is too easy imho

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so apparently the MC didn't end up with Yuna, but with Mana?

Damn, even though I prefer Yuna... not to mention we don't know her fate by the end...

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The mc is actually getting some in this work, this calms my rage a lot and makes me want to read...

edit: le downvotes? Is this le reddit? EPIC DOWNBOATS ENGAGED

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Thanks for 5°

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not gonna lie this is amazing

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Guys... another MUST READ of Sanbun Kyoden is - " Sayuki No Sato - Village of Sayuki "

ill be honest and say that i missed this master piece aswell... i had the manga for 3 years already before i actually took the time to read it... ABSOLUTE GENIUS!!!! SERIOUSLY... BRILLIANT PIECE OF SANBUN KYODEN!

The link for Sayuki No Sato is here... read from beginning to end... trust me... its something else... ^_^

http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/g/255150/a3580ed1e2/

you can thank me later.... ^_^

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love the end of chapter 9

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man i wanna steal waifus too ;_;

i wish i had ntr corruption powers

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i still can't entirely get over the artstyle i gotta admit

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"Stop interfering with my pussy time".... huh. I've never heard that before.

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This is not how hypnosis works.

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I really appreciate you translating this ragdoll but I have to ask; will you be posting the last 2 chapters? As it would finish the story and we would finally be able to see what they are saying in the final chapters. Thanks.

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It's Sanbun Kyoden, great artwork, but always NTR. Not complaining, but it's predictable. It's great read, and good job on the trans.

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Amazing, I love this kind of long works by Sanbun Kyoden, usually the quality is pretty good when there are so many chapters & this time is not exception, even so I think the first part is the best losing level at the latest chapters but recovering quality at the last couple of chapters, besides specially that ending is wonderful, I barely can await to see the next chapter.
Really thanks a lot for the translation.

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@dviant

On page 136 in the bonus pages (/g-hentai/?s=07b26e565c/697570-136), did you notice Risa and Goshuu from Sanbun's earlier work Sougetsu no Kisetsu? (http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/576308/115b1bd9ec/)

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The ride never ends!

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anyone had this http://www.toranoana.jp/mailorder/article/04/0030/13/40/040030134059.html

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Good chapter #15, really a very good chapter, I feel a bit sad for the poor Kousuke-kun, now seems just a puppet more, however the best part of the chapter is that the good guy seems unable to satisfy any of the women so Kousuke-kun probably still have some kind of hope.

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nice been waiting for this to be complete thx a lot or this; but I thought their was an extra chapter maybe i am mistaken from my raws i'll have to check.

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I'm so relieved this wonderfully made netorare had a happy ending.

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You didn't translate the tankobon version, the final chapter had an extra scene.

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Hi, if you refer to the chinese translated tankouban, there's 16 more pages after #16:
http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/g/697570/059acaa6dd/?p=1

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happy ending.....maybe?

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Well now that the story is finish I'll give my thoughts. It's definitely well written and has many hot scenes (plus the artwork is amazing) but like many great stories things sadly take a turn for the worse. NTR is tricky in that while I do want the girl at the end to betray the guy I don't want to feel bad about it afterwards. The writer has done such a good job of making me care for the main girl that I feel bad when she fails. Even this "happy ending" feels hollow too me since she admitted he can't satisfy her.

It feels too me like the writer wanted to have both a "good ending" and a classic NTR ending and as a result he fails on both parts in my opinion. The best part of the NTR ending is at the end where we see what the girl does after she has given in to her slutty nature which we don't have here which ruins that end (then again given how much I stared to feel for the character I probably wouldn't have been able to enjoy it as much as I would like). At the same time though this happy ending feels completely hollow to me, I mean she lost, she gave completely in to the NTR and even told her love to his face that the other guy's cock is better. Even if you erase that memory from them we can see from how she dresses that it's still effecting her. Which means she'll either leave him eventually, or another NTR thing will happen. If the writer really wanted a happy ending he should have gone all end and have love actually win out.

Yea it would have defeated the purpose of the NTR and i probably wouldn't have gotten off on it but at least my romantic side would take pleasure in knowing that love beat all :D

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where is the kind of Alternate End, Extra Chapter? why is it deleted in E galleries ?

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ALt ending pls

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Question. What was the point of this? To show that the Hypnotist could do it? Seriously. Purpose please. Purpose!

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was that all? if so then it was good but short.

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Not enough Yuna :(

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@Loki The Flameshield It's just an NTR man, there's really no purpose other than fapping. And no hypnotists can't do these in reality in case you are wanting to learn hypnotism.

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The fat dude's dick didn't even look bigger.

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One day Taiki will become a man, and find all these people and kill them in a beautiful murder spree full of d!ck chopping and head lopping :D
I enjoyed this for mindless fapping but not the story due to by the time I finished fapping and that inner Bloodsworn Paladin awoken and had problems with the lack of revenge.

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