Dis art man, hnnnnnng

Though it kind of weird to have already read his other works so I already know what the pairings are

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Doesn't matter if I already know who are the pairings, Yohane's work is always a pleasure to read XD

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I am sorry but as for the page 34, the "思い叶わなかった時" in the last lines of Patchouli, might simply refers to the wish of Shanghai.

So I think what Patchouli suggests here, is that when Patchouli has successfully confessed to Alice, which should make Alice unavailable to Shanghai and totally break Shanghai's wish, she will try to make Marisa take responsibility and marry Shanghai as some compensation (becasue Marisa promised she will help Shanghai become human and win Alice over)

Besides, this one is somehow followed by two later ones along the story line, which make me further prefer my comprehension fo page 34

(1) Patchouli does successfully make the confession to Alice
http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/g/656948/4592470161/

(2) As Alice is unavailable now, Shanghai seems to remember what Patchouli says in this doujinshi, and just be bold enough to win Marisa's heart
http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/g/633147/78400c5460/

There always exisits ambiguity in colloquial conversations(especially japanese) in doujinshis. So I think the translation could have multiple options maybe.

Thanks very much for this translation:)

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...Ok I'm starting to feel better about the pairing. This gives Shanghai character, though unrelatedly I feel bad Hourai gets left out. Go Marisa! Find the spell!

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@Bigbigfool: I was wondering what was going on since after that last one showed it has a over arching story so that page made me confused still good work from Yohane as always.

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What if Yohane is right and the dolls are already youkai? That's why Alice wasn't playable in DDC. She couldn't notice something was wrong.

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