It's missing two first pages. The ones with the human banging on a certain ebony feline (who is also seen on the first panel with the human's face, wearing her disguise).

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I still stand by my opinion that rewrites, no matter the genre, are a disrespect to the original creator and can hurt the possibility of an actual translation rather than help it.

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Rewrites are fine until there's an actual translation. I'd rather get some effort than no effort at all.

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It was a nice rough translation but those two missing pages as Krillos said are going to naw at me today.

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Nice to see more female kemono/furry x human male stuff, but it would be even better to see an actual translation and the missing pages.

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@ juuza

But there is no effort here. All this person is doing is taking someone else's art and plastering their own story over it.

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Rewrites are just terrible and they should be expunged. I don’t want to read a random script. I much prefer reading the actually translation. If Foxtide888 had any respect for the source material then he would commission a translation and not butcher someone else’s work. Furthermore, not only are the first 3 pages from the original doujinshi are missing, but page 8 is from the new doujinshi by Nakagami Takashi. (Link to it is included below)
https://www.doujinshi.org/book/698109/
Hopefully, someone will post the continuation story.

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I freaking hate rewrites, just translate the damn thing!

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RAW: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/564043/41c82f6698/
English Rewrite: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/706287/32e2b483da/
Spanish Translation of English Rewrite: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/706473/9e673dba4e/
Korean Translation of English Rewrite: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/707136/17131ac0a0/

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For so many people that hate rewrites and would prefer a properly done version, there's not one to be found (of this), is there? In the bounties or otherwise.

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