6 pages in? You're improving Rascal Mah Boi. Six pages in and there was your first question mark? But no, seriously, you are improving, keep going the distance, and drill to the heavens, your spot as the BEST translator in E-hentai history is right there!

Base +9, Ryo75 +9, Sartra +7, baliwisirg22 +7, Yumeni +3, Tovarich1 +4, darcmistespilon +7, DOIHI +4, Kona-chan -7, Chanel Williams +4, Artichoke +6, XxRecyclexX -7, DieHard -6, and 4 more...

Luke, I think we'll all be DEAD and buried by then considering the pace of his 'improvement'

Base +8, harbrun +16, Ryo75 +9, baliwisirg22 +7, TouhouPairings +6, wavedash -7, surted +11, Kona-chan +7, Chanel Williams -4, XxRecyclexX +7, DieHard +6, hihohahi -21, Traze -6, and 2 more...

Even with his translation the plot was pretty clear.... what a twisted scenario.

Base +7, Chanel Williams +4, Traze +6, Fofotron +6

i'll admit,it is an improvement over the usual stuff. acceptable work CGR. keep working at improving the quality of your releases.

Base +7, Chanel Williams +4, Traze +6, Fofotron +6