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Posted on 16 January 2014, 07:18 UTC by
raflcaptar
This doujin was translated by doujin-moe.us
Posted on 17 January 2014, 04:18 UTC by
Zelinko
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A good work but it's translation looks really rushed with not a lot of QC if any
Also there area a lot of glaring typos in this one a number of pages need cleanup on the erasure of original text as the parts not properly cleared out are in part covering over the translated text on multiple pages.
Page 11 Typo: 'I'll make it good fore you' instead of 'good For you.'
Page 13 Typo: 'Marisa is in a Nelson Hold1' instead of 'Nelson Hold!'
Page 18: Marisa's dialogue really looks badly translated (if not machine translated with just how incredibly clunky it sounds even if it's supposed to be fragments of thought)
Page 32: Reimua? Really? Come one guys. This is just being lazy now.
Page 43: 'Marisa Ther'es no time to rest' How rushed was this?
I hope whoever commissioned this gets a cleanup for free because a lot of these errors are really obvious ones
@Superhornet: Point conceded
Base +8, bourbonjp -5, The Inker +7, Dm1289 -5, Zexar +9, shadowj8 +5, Koroshi +6, 6PUTOCTb +10
Posted on 17 January 2014, 08:47 UTC by
yiyoiyi
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and where is part 1?
Base +7
Posted on 16 January 2014, 13:36 UTC by
Trundle
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Never thought I'd see this translated. Thanks so much for uploading this!
Base +6
@Zelinko: The names are alternate and legit spelling since it's written that way in the games. Like so: http://i.imgur.com/pzqCh5F.png
The typo you listed after that is legit though. typesetter, fixit.
Base +7, The Inker +7, Zakuzelo -8
Posted on 22 January 2014, 06:47 UTC by
ashpee
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If only this sport existed irl.
Base +2, Discord1 +4
Posted on 16 January 2014, 08:12 UTC by
GeneralSky
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YES! ALL OF MY YES!!!
Thank you very much.
Base +5
Posted on 17 January 2014, 03:26 UTC by
DrQuint
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Did... did the translator really just decide to translate part 2 first?
Oh "you don't need to know what hapenned". Okay.
Base +5, Kokaiin -6