Needs proofreading and copyediting, there's a bit too much grammar and even spelling error for this to be A-class.
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Posted on 15 January 2014, 00:43 UTC by
Harmonian
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Translation makes it unreadable.
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Posted on 15 January 2014, 02:52 UTC by
celltf
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What Red_Piotrus said. Not terrible but you could definitely use a proofreader.
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Posted on 15 January 2014, 01:39 UTC by
manzhao
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Damn, that is one way to make a sale. She should become a traveling saleswoman.
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I'm surprised no one said it yet, page 3, dat ass!
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Posted on 14 January 2014, 23:54 UTC by
CDub7888
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You can't put a price on good pussy.
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Posted on 15 January 2014, 05:20 UTC by
Hezard
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It's like being in Nevada and Southern California all over again.
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Posted on 15 January 2014, 23:12 UTC by
Second Dus
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MR CUSTOMER JUST FOR NOW I'M GOING TO LET YOU FUCK MY PUSSY FOR FREE
HOW DO YOU FEEL ABOUT THIS EVENT
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Posted on 15 January 2014, 16:24 UTC by
reaper_day
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When i first read "Sanagi Torajirou" my mind only think "netorare story", but SURPRISE! the womann is not been mind breaking and becoming the cumdumpster of some guy, so thumbs up for me!!!!!!!
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Posted on 15 January 2014, 23:57 UTC by
trewerd
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Thank you. This has been floating on the site for a while and I've been waiting for a English translation of it.
The translation itself is a tad iffy, especially in the later pages, but it's nice to finally know what's going on XD.
Base +7
Posted on 15 January 2014, 19:47 UTC by
Marinaway
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All these spelling mistakes make it sound like Gregor from Fire Emblem: Awakening translated it, thanks nonetheless.
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if this happened to me, I would be a repeat customer of hers whenever I needed to cum. I'd also make sure to cum inside her pussy or throat or ass, not all over her clothes like that. If you ask me the guy should just ask this woman out and pay for the bill over a lifetime
Base +5
Posted on 15 January 2014, 13:08 UTC by
wastedman
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Thanks for the translation.
That 100000 yen = 1000 dollars.
Those were owed, not owned...
I am looking for a smooth story, and I feel a bit disappointed.
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Posted on 15 January 2014, 19:14 UTC by
DualGlint
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How rare for Sanagi to do a story that isn't NTR (considering that his artwork is somewhat like Takeda, and the last doujin release was NTR).
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Posted on 15 January 2014, 02:07 UTC by
Noreally
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At first I was like: "Sigh...hentai logic strikes again."
But after the last few pages....wow, this sort of crap probably happens in real life lol.
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Posted on 15 January 2014, 09:12 UTC by
linkCS
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Sanagi Torajirou? Kay. Cheating? Whelp, that's expected. Boyfriend is cheating on girlfriend? That's not diff- wait what?
EDIT: I wonder if people are just oblivious to me being simply surprised at a change of pace from an author? Not that it matters.
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Posted on 14 January 2014, 22:39 UTC by
tkhang
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First time met, and already sucking him off. What a lucky basterd. I don't even know why he is complaining. I would be jumping for joy. WAIT UP, there's a hidden agenda. Wait til you finish reading. Then you would get why his is complaining. HA HA HA, girls are tricky.
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