Certainly my favorite Trump's comic so far

Base +6

Aww, a wonderful tale.

Base +16, Ricky235 +8, tracingthelines -7

"That's why I'm called Melony I guess."
Because, you know, your parents obviously knew at birth that you'd grow giant tits and cultivate melons.

Base +9, DJ 4DM1N +4, tracingthelines +7, i_r_ecchi +7, Beenjammin +6, D u b b y +9

Finally! I wanted to see this comic for a long time! Trump did an awesome job.

Base +7

Let me eat these big melons !

Base +4

*Sigh* I appreciate the need to bring attention to more english furry doujins, but as stated earlier I don't see the point in disrespecting the artist's original story with a rewrite, regardless of the genre.

Base +8, fadefade +14, orcishlad +7, tracingthelines +7, narach +7, PeteParrot +6, axleswift +6, ChainsOfVengence +8, glib24 +5, sgc_geh +8, The Archivist +8, Beenjammin +6

Rewriting Trump's work is especially bad since he asks people not to do it on his site.

Also, this rewrite is atrocious in pretty much every way - dumb plot, lame language ("I GUESS," how inspiring!), and a poor choice of font.

Base +5, PeteParrot +6, glib24 +5, The Archivist +8, Beenjammin +6, bucket90 +5

"phrank?"

Base +3

As a rewrite, I don't find anything wrong with it, Its one of the better ones, As long as I can read it, don't particularly mind, SO all yall need to stop bitching saying its a insult. WHo cares if Trump says not to rewrite his stuff, Wtf is the point when we cant read it?..

Base +6