This is a comic by Mauroz

Edit: sorry a person in the comments notified me that I was missing a part so now its there and the story is up to date ;3 also added a couple of new pics :3

this is really nice and the art is awesome too, I can't wait to see more.

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Now THIS is what Equestria Girls should have been!
Great art, interesting story, the characters are given positions you would expect, and just so damn funny XD

Wait... Is that Derpy on page 6?
First panel, on the left, blond girl with a grey jacket with the arms out like wings

Page 64... I think that was Derpy on page 6, I feel there are quite a few... similarities between the two

Wow... 129 Pages of story so far... and just wow, this is probably the BEST fan made THING of ANY SERIES I have EVER seen

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Please finish uploading all the pages.
Thanks you sooo much

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@ Linksbro1

Why Yes yes it is X3

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Man I just LOVE #136

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Why is Applejack wearing an native american attire? That don't seem right... Then again, I draw human Rarity black. You win again, Lady Irony...

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Ya you missed a section between Rarity healing Twilight and the introduction of Rainbow. but thanks for catching me up.

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From my point of view this is what happens when Sailor moon meets MLP, which is actually a pretty good story from my view. But, to me some of the dialogue feels a little forced, but it only happens sparingly in this comic. In fact, I enjoy this than most fanfiction of MLP because they try to be original and not throw together the typical fanfiction cliches for MLP fanfiction. It could do without the artwork in my opinion. To me putting artwork right in the middle of the comic is more annoying than the artwork at the end. Artwork at the end I can ignore because some comics actually do the same thing, but the middle is a little less forgiveable. Again, this is just my opinion and as such please respect it.

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This is the greatest thing to happen to anything ever. The literal only problem I have with it is how it's all Avatar-esque. Like, I don't see why they need to have literal elemental powers. Twilight, maybe, but that's because her harmony is magic. Can't wait for more!

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This should be in the n-hentai class........

There is nothing explicit in there.

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i expected that doctor whooves would be a little older
like a real doctor of some sort???
the others are so far perfect dont u agree?

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Am I the only one who thought human luna was HAWT!

Edit: holy shit humanized nightmare moon, queen chrysalis, and king sombra all look like badasses. All they're missing is discord...

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This really is an excellent series, and great adaption of the source material to the writer's story. I certainly look forward to seeing more.

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