It's surprisingly entertaining. I like it.

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Very enjoyable.

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I love all your rewrite Foxtide :)

I think they are even better than most of the original scripts... often riddled with "I'm cumming blablabla"

Keep on :)

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Alright the big bad Jeykll has some thing to say.

I loved this I want MOAR I love the concept, story and most of the reaction of the characters
I really want to see more of these two. Good job!

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For rewrites... you did a good job.

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I know that I'm probably going to get flamed from this, but I wonder why when one rewrites a furry story no one bats an eye, but when any other doujinshi is rewritten there's a storm. To me I wish these stories, no matter the type, were all translated. I would rather have the story remain in Japanese rather than to have the original story disrespected with a rewrite.

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not bad, i enjoyed it for sure, and hope this author comes out with more stories to come

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@Chained:
Normally i would be with you on that, but not here:
Most rewrites are plain stupid, horrible/no story. Just random crap put together.

This here, ok, might not be perfect, but the setting for the story is ok, and for many a rewritte is stilll better then no english Version at all.

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I gotta start breaking snow globes in my house I think I got about 3.

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...He..Hates his life?...If he doesn't want it ill take it.

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