Posted on 14 December 2013, 04:26 UTC by
immaics
This is my first English translation. Might be sloppy.
Don't know Persona, so hopefully I translated things correctly...
Posted on 14 December 2013, 05:34 UTC by
bladedfool
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For a first translation, it pretty good. Not knowing anything about Persona, but still getting a pretty good gist about the names and terms makes it even better. Overall a great job.
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A few grammar mistakes, but nothing too bad. Congrats, you beat CGRascal level on your first attempt.
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Posted on 14 December 2013, 15:58 UTC by
Issac
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Just a correction... this is Persona 4 Arena not Persona 3.
Base +11, Yossarian762 +8, chibidw +10, MoonShine +9, KillCarrion +8, DreadGrimReaper +4
Posted on 15 December 2013, 08:00 UTC by
jin21
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You sir deserve a round of applaud.... there are many korean translated works out waiting to be turned into English. Keep up the fine job !
Base +6, MoonShine +9, DreadGrimReaper +4, Yossarian762 +6
Posted on 14 December 2013, 16:43 UTC by
Devildie
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original one been posted tho...
Base +10, Yossarian762 +8, DreadGrimReaper +4
Posted on 21 December 2013, 20:34 UTC by
Nicaeea
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Kind sir, I applaud you for such endeavors! lol jk, but thanks a lot for accepting my bounty.
Base +9, DreadGrimReaper +4
It's pretty good traslation. thanks for this
Base +11
The beginning makes no sense given my knowledge of Persona, but it seems like typical H-doujin fare, so I'm inclined to believe that it's not an error in *translation*, but rather the original author of the doujin disregarding the Persona setting.
Base +6