Fetishist Setsuko-san & Bride Setsuko-San [English] [Rewrite] [Decensored] [Incomplete]

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Posted:	2013-10-21 13:38
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Language:	English (R)

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Posted on 21 October 2013, 13:38 UTC by CrossLegacy

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A test rewrite of the gallery found here: http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/g/639956/9d45e8449d/
I've no talent in translation, but found the piece too good to have a translation that reads like a bad Chinese subtitle. If you're fine with this sample (more than 3.5 starts by tomorrow), I'll finish the gallery, if not well, I've had worse. :)

Posted on 21 October 2013, 13:49 UTC by Randomguy664

Score +167

Just say no to rewrites.

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Posted on 21 October 2013, 13:50 UTC by yejz

Score +251

Oh this is awe-
>REWRITE

0.5 stars forever and nothing more

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Posted on 21 October 2013, 13:56 UTC by bladedfool

Score -45

You can read it, and it's understandable so it's decent enough. As long as it's not straying off at all from the original story.

A lot more better than the other "translation"

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Posted on 21 October 2013, 14:00 UTC by colossol

Score +233

You can't reliably get back anything that's been lost in the original translation. I and others do appreciate the effort but this is not the way to go about it. If you really want to clean up the translation then you need to go back to the original material.

Base +11, Xephir +15, TenNyoTaiMoRi +12, Beane +10, Big McLargehuge +6, Shibun +10, fadefade +14, futzxx +8, Shanzenkou +8, Kyou_kun +8, tcvds +8, tsul +1, TheTitto +8, and 13 more...

Posted on 21 October 2013, 15:39 UTC by ncc1701z

Score +37

I could be wrong, but after a quick comparison, I think the uploader meant "Re-Edit".
In that regard, @colossol was right.

Base +5, futzxx +8, TaggingReader +10, icesonic +9, 58569 +5

Posted on 22 October 2013, 02:41 UTC by mellowjello

Score +6

Well, this just made me want to read the original.

Base +8, 58569 +5, J_Howard -7

Posted on 22 October 2013, 05:13 UTC by vgjunky

Score +14

call it a re-edit next time

Base +9, 58569 +5

Posted on 22 October 2013, 09:39 UTC by oneiwonder

Score +11

Exactally as colossol said thanks for the effort but you just can't. ether commission this with a group or start a bounty for a translation. If you do the bounty i will be happy to contribute a bit to it as well. Like the others said before say Re-edit next time.

Base +6, 58569 +5

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reclass:	manga
language:	english rewrite
artist:	aoki kanji
female:	maid
misc:	uncensored