Chapters 1-3 in order compiled...
will add new chapters if any...
https://ouo.io/h9dpMq
Posted on 02 October 2013, 00:12 UTC by
TK162
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Thank you sir
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a hug became a fuck, you know this also applies in real life and not the hentai universe?
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Posted on 02 October 2013, 17:23 UTC by
psaw
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I dunno... that last chapter felt so strange... It's like the author decided to abandon the story, so he/she quickly put together a half-assed "Ok ok, now I love you" final chapter with basically no buildup, no conflict, no cause, no reason no... "other girl appear so she needs to prove she actually loves the guy". It was really just like... the girl was actually high or drunk
Enjoyed this one a lot less than I was expecting to :/
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She's.......horrible. Good story though.
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I kinda would have liked to see how she suddenly went from 'There's no such thing as love!' in the 2nd chapter to casually dating and appearing in public with him and then 'I love you!' without him having to tease her.
EDIT: What psaw said too. This would be perfect when if it ended on the second chapter.
Base +11, fidazzle +9, blunt005 +8, Maxsteele +8
Posted on 04 November 2013, 16:42 UTC by
Demonlogan
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"I think the author just said 'fuck it, yolo' for the last chapter. Not worth it."
Au contraire, much preferred to the trend of "String them along with two chapters of vanilla, then ntr tank, then last chapter half-assed 'back to vanilla even though the audience can't help but call bullshit on the play' patch."
To avoid that scenario coming to a head, worth it.
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Posted on 03 October 2013, 14:08 UTC by
pedobear1
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Omg Vanilla, soo cute!
Gives me Diabetes :D
Base +14, Maxsteele +8, mumei-chan +13
Posted on 03 October 2013, 01:50 UTC by
ninjas12
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I agree with both randomguy664 and psaw ... it felt like the author jumped the gun. I literally read the first page of chapter 3 and thought I missed something ... was not an enjoyable chapter. The second chapter was definitely the best (particularly the last page!)
Base +6, Maxsteele +8, tcvds +8, Crimsoncharcoal +6, xDraygon +4
Posted on 02 October 2013, 11:36 UTC by
VanJunkie
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can some1 confirm if this is the last or can we expect MOARRRR!!
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Posted on 16 January 2014, 21:53 UTC by
josh1002
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... work out your dam problems, girl! most of you are right, the story just went out the window on the third chapter. its just so... I dunno, may its cuz I got burned in a bad way because I had an unclear relationship, but I really think it was just bad. plot wise anyway. but hey, anatomically? it was alright. I prefer the author's Momiko X Rito one though.
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