I can see the difference between a veteran translator compare with a non-veteran as clear as night and day. Your translation was nice and easy to understand. The translator of the other version was less influenced in Japanese compare to you guys. I was waiting for a better version and here it is. Nice job well done. The prequel was released by you guys first so this is a nice way to wrap it up.

Base +10, Noterrelly +10

Wow, why can't I have an arranged marriage with a beautiful centaur girl? Oh wait, could it be because I live in the cruel, real world?

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Wow, this is great! :D. And don't worry about you having been beaten to the punch, as there surely are those - such as me - who didn't read that one to begin with (must've missed it <_<;;;; )

Base +8, Noterrelly +10, Rei-Tenshi +36, Evil Dragon +16, xXtestingXx +8, MaxMach +11, Maha +9, oneiwonder +5, Silvie +20

Much better translation. But that ending was a huge turn-off if you knew the history the author is referencing.

Base +10, darken +10, youngfolk -16, SeedyHedonist -6, Hugh Jarse -5

Wait, wait, wait. Does that make them... HOLY HELL THEY ARE SIBLINGS

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Holy shit, it's like seeing someone take mine and make it 3x better. I only see one real content difference between my translation (I went too fast through the part where she talks about horses at the beginning, so I didn't realize the kanji order was switched and they were talking about a guy being around horses instead of centaurs being around him >_>), but I admit the word choice was better, and more importantly the editing was much, much better.

Oh well. I guess this is what happens when you compare veteran work to...a guy that's been doing it by himself for like two weeks. I'll catch up to you guys some day!

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Rune

Traditional clans marry cousins to keep the blood, when you take that to hentai standarts it's siblings fucking the hell out of each other's brains

Base +2, arseburgers +5, Shylight +5, extremophile +5, lisemer +6, mellowjello +7, Blaze_fire +7

Great work, apart of that obnoxious watermark right on first page.
You already have the credits for that, why write on top of the centaur girl too?

Base +15, Rei-Tenshi +36, Evil Dragon +16, florrat -6, silf_FFR-41MR -10, Luminere -9, zukuenft +11, Fake Hero -7, extremophile +5

Much better than the last guy who translated this, he didnt even translate the last page.

Base +2, zukuenft -11, CaptainKuro -7

@Mant: Because there are people who like to steal translations, delete the credits page and take credit for the work. I've seen worse watermarks; it's not like covering a *little* of the girl's horse legs on page 1 is the end of the world, and it's not like that watermark is on every page.

Base +14, zukuenft -11

You know, with all these centaur doujins coming out, I kinda get the feeling that so far pretty much all of them have a connection with eachother.....

Base +8

One of the few times being called a horsefucker doesn't seem half bad.

Base +8

Fucking arousing and... kindo of... sweat?

Been some time since I have felt that moe sensation, guess the end is quite sweat to make my stone heart skip a beat :DD

Enjoy you guys :3

Base +11

I'd hit it so hard I'd win the Kentucky Derby.

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This is so delicious. This artist is quickly becoming one of my favourites.

Base +12, Rockstopper +12, extremophile +5, Limited +6

What a douchebag father

Base +4

alt translation in this anthology http://g.e-hentai/g/625402/115e86d479/

Base +39, scrappy135 +7

Maybe it's not all that bad. Not that I of any way encourage screwing your own sisters, but there are situations like this even though it's very uncommon. After all they were complete strangers when they first met no?

Base +2

At that point i'd stop giving a fuck, she hot anyway....

Base +5, lisemer +6

This isn't about a centaur! If you look at page 3, the girl is obviously a troll.

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