Oh goodness those Persona4 puns and references. This was hilarious...

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This may well be the one of the greatest Persona 4 Doujins of 'em all...threesomes with both NaotoxRise, and ChiexYukiko...now...
Someone please de-CGRascal it.

@TheNaughtyShrink
Yes, I have noticed some definite improvement in his work. But still, for every one he does better (His recent translation of Break Blue Double Drive was actually pretty good), another seems even worse (His translation of a Gargantia compilation was barely even legible). This one I'd say falls into the middle. Not too bad, but not that good either.

Sadly I don't know of a way to contact him, but if you can, and could help improve his grammar more, then more power to you.

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@Zhanex
Tbh, CGRascal has improved a lot recently. Sure, his English is nowhere near perfect, and it used to be quite awful; but people are giving him way more pepper than he deserves. You are not paying for his work, so if you want to complain, at least offer to help him out. Have you seen some of gg's (anime translation group) first releases? If you had, you wouldn't be bashing this guy.

On another note, does anyone know if CGRascal has a blog or something? I have a master's degree in English grammar and will start teaching at a high school level next year. I have a lot of free time lately and would gladly proofread for him if he agrees to it, but I don't know how to get in contact with him.

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@The Naughty Shrink: http://linkshrink.net/7k8yWF

Your proofread won't help. The "translations" are entirely wrong in the first place.

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Naoto always looks so cute, also I found this hilarious

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