Hopefully someone who knows english will handle this.

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@ukshadow more like someone who knows japanese that can translate into english. rewrite is no fun.

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So this is how the red light district run by rinnosuke started up?

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This piss-poor translation is more than this doujin deserves.
God damn it all, just couldn't resist, could you Avion? Just had to throw in some genuine mind break in the end, as if the whole mass-enslavement thing wasn't bad enough. Why the fuck are stories about the downfall of Gensokyo so common? Yeah, nothing turns a Touhou fan on like his obsession getting destroyed.
Fuck this book, fuck this series, and fuck the boner-killing ending and plot.

...the art and rape's still very fapable if I ignore everything else. That's not easy, though.

@Zelinko: Man, I'm not even talking about misanthropy and whatnot, I'm just pissed at the constant world destruction and how people seem to eat that shit up.
Also ballgagged Kanako overshadowed everything else in this book, and is frustratingly located right in the middle of the worst part.

@KFX: Classy, and dead wrong. I'm the one funding a good chunk of these scans, you dolt. I don't hate hentai, just mind break and mass-destruction shit like this.

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@ZakuZelo:
You know looking at it It's a question I that keeps coming up in my mind. Is it the manifestation of underlying misogyny coming to the forefront due to Gensokyo being a setting full of strong females in a Japanese game (Admittedly the West is not above this...)? It's not only Touhou which has this being a common theme, but it happens other female focused settings in which males are minor characters if not all but absent from the setting.

Maybe its that its the idea of frustrated males/Hikkikomori manifesting their own frustrations at a lack of success with the opposite sex and devolving to rape fantasies. Usually its either Deus Ex Machina which allows for these strong women to conveniently lose their powers and will to become the slaves to a 'naturally superior' male. But really I don't get why it happens just so often.

This will probably be down voted to hell and back but eh. Helps get it off my chest

@KFX:
Because the Rape->Mindbreak things are just so generically done to death and bland that they're not as fappable AND more importantly they're BORING! They tend to just blur together into one story and it gets to the point of "Oh just another Rape/Mindbreak story" to the point where CGRascal doesn't really hurt the story as we all know how it's going to be. 'Man rapes Touhou. Touhou almost instantly mindbreaks and becomes his slave.' then we got is this a group one or just a solo. If it's a group then 'man rapes more touhous and they become slaves' else end. Yawn....

You need to have some sort of thing that makes it interesting or it's utterly forgettable. This one of the utterly forgettable.

@Zakuzelo: You can't segregate that from the 'constant world destruction' It's part of the reason why they do it.

Apparently you can't enjoy hentai if you don't enjoy rape and mindbreak. Man I guess I really missed that message. Guess its back to Yuri and Futa for me.

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Good god what the fuck is it with the social justice here?

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Avion village works are fapable regardless of content, his art is great!

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He is the smartest man in the world. He has solved equations that had been deemed impossible. He has understood things that even the greatest minds of our times considered incomprehensible. Every task laid before him is but a challenge, a riddle to be deciphered, a short diversion, a game. He has accomplished, in the span of his life, more than the rest of humanity combined could ever do in a hundred years. Some whisper that he must have been gifted by the gods themselves - such is his brilliance.

At this moment, the smartest man in the world is weeping in the corner of a room, a gun held to his head. His ego has been crushed, his will broken. He wonders if this is his punishment for daring to presume that his intelligence surpassed that of the heavens. As they say, the higher you are, the harder you fall, and he has indeed plummeted harder than the foolhardy Icarus who ignored the warnings of his father Daedalus.

He has read one of CGRascal's translations.

He does not understand. He does not comprehend. He has tried to win the game, but realized too late that the only way to win was to not play.

In a room, a shot is fired.

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Translation: Not great, editing/proofreading would be nice and stop cutting the words with "-" so often;

Art: pretty good but doesn't matter so long as the translation isn't great;

Story: well it's pretty boring and frankly I almost agree with Zelinko except this is hentai and anything goes according to the artist's expression and his sadism;

There's too much hate going on against CGRascal, sure some stuff sucks badly, and the fact that the editing and grammar are horrid for a translation, but you guys make too big of a fuss over this. Instead of complaining, try to enjoy it or at least donate to people who actually CAN make the best out of a typical rape-touhou girl doujin. It's called being mature about it.

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@Zaku, Zelinko: How do you uptight prissies even find your way to places like this? It's like you are entirely unfamiliar with the concepts of "porn" and "sexual fantasy". This doujin is _tame_. It's barely even a thing, and you act like 70-year-old baptists who have never missed a day at church stumbling into a pride parade.

If you have this much of a problem with one of the most basic porn doujin setups I suggest, as serious friendly advice, for you to leave and never come back. Hentai clearly isn't your thing. That's fine. Not everybody needs to like everything. But spending your time at a place devoted to a thing you hate is not rational.

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I'll admit I let some of those comments stand, so that everyone can have an idea of just how ridiculous they look, trying to mention social justice nonsense on a site like this. Someone will enlighten Zelinko as to why things are as they are from his perspective; they need not look far to see that.

Short story shorter. Good doujin, bad translation. Might look for the original instead as I'd rather take moon runes over bad English.

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did I fap? yes.

did I enjoy the fap? yes.

was the art by johnny the cause for said fap? yes.

all in all, I really enjoy his art. especially the way he draws thighs and naval.

so in my hart this was a good dojin

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Honestly with a plot this basic, CGRascal doesn't really hurt it. This is not Rapid Rabbit and his plotful doujins, just another Avion Village rape/mindbreak doujin. Not to mention considering it's Sanae, there's better choices.

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What are Sanae's 10 desires?

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I was commissioned to scan this few days before it got uploaded. I'll most likely end up scanning it for the commissioner despite this upload. Heck, perhaps I can get someone to work on it from like Little White Butterflies. Who knows.

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more of this artist is always welcome.

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Fuck avion village and fuck CGrascal

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Ugh, WTF is all this vanilla shit doing here on this site, this is so boring! Why is it that fans of raunchy hentai always get shafted because of vanilla/moralfaqs shitty taste of morality? They always bitch and moan about how much they are offended by the hardcore stuff, but fans of gangbang, futanari, rape, and NTR don't say shit about vanilla works. Vanilla is boring as hell because of the fact that it's the same repetitive thing about sappy love stories that have no kink to them. I came here to fap to smut, not a goddamn romance novel. Anyone who's a fan of hardcore hentai, an is sick of boring vanilla hentai shoup be up in arms because the good doujins aren't being translated, in place of the boring ass yuri, and vanilla. I've heard that some translators won't even do the good doujins because moralfaq's would be "offended" by the content. vanilla/moralfaqs, if you don't want to be offended by the content, don't read it! Why is it that every time a good gangbang doujin comes out, someone has to throw a hissy fit because the main heroine isn't with some good looking douche bag that would get her anyway in real life? I read hentai because of the taboo that it shows, not a reflection of real life! I had it up to here with vanillafaqs bitching about NTR, and gangbang. Anyone who is a fan of hardcore hentai, please up vote this comment, it's about damn time we wage a war on vanillafaqs, and their boring porn, but most of all, we should push to ensue that more hardcore touhou doujins are being translated into English. I'm sick of all these shitty vanilla doujin getting translated!

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Oh god all these upset people.

If you want to protect the Gensokyo in your heart, why would you be looking up doujins where the girls get raped in the first place?

Oh, and go play Concealed the Conclusion - you'll really enjoy it.

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Being in the middle is never easy

@DarKDragonite you should probably just stfu, you're making your own kind look retarded. Rape/mindbreak/NTR have been done to death more way much more than Vanilla, it doesn't help that some artist thinks it's obligatory to make such content just for the sake there being none atm and that it's easy $

Zelinko has some very valid points.

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