I have to admit, that was as flavourful as it gets. All that thou, thee, fret, zounds took my head for a spin. Almost makes me wish the original FFTactics was using all that talk. It'd be like reading Cyan (FF6) talk all over again!

Not to mention the tribute to Lavian (monk?), Alicia (black mage?), Equip Sword+Holy Sword Skills (badass Priest until her calculator skills upgrade!) and RamzaxAgrias because they match so well.

Props to XCX Scans for going through with it. Really nice set up :)

PS
I notice Lavian and Alicia are very memorable side characters to many doujin artists even though they didn't do any talking in the original game (if memory serves correct). This isn't the very time I've seen them used in a doujin. Rad on the other hand... poor fellow is forgotten lol

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I feel like I'm reading a shakespearean play and it's awesome. I shall favor this as testament to the amount of effort that went into this work.

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Shucks, I was waiting for the panel where Ramza says "I shall now giveth you the dick".

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too... much... purple prose...

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With present tense verbs:
I - no suffix (do, have, etc.)
thou - +st suffix (dost, hast, etc.)
he, she, it - +th suffix (doth, hath, etc.)
Past tense pretty much the same as modern English
Thy = Your
Thine = Your IF THE NEXT word begins with a vowel (e.g. "thy sword" but "thine eyes") to avoid repetition of the sound
Forsooth! = Indeed! This is truly so!
Yonder = That one. Over there. ("Hills yonder" "the wench over yonder")

Also,
thou
thee - objective case of "thou," used as the direct or indirect object of a verb, e.g.:
Thou art a sodomite.
I tell thee, thou art a sodomite.
A thousand bulls most unholy ravage thee each evenfall.

Not sure if this is accurate, I'm just reposting it.

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It's an nice effort but starting now (the 4th-5th doujin by this guy you've done) is pretty jarring. Still, I have no real complaints than that.

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@HorridGuest I wasn't very consistent with a lot of it and I didn't really want to be bothered double checking it, so... YEAH! I just went in and had fun with it. It wasn't really supposed to be serious. D=

@MackDiesel This is only the 2nd we've done from Bakuhatsu BRS.

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My god. I don't know if you were going for comedy, but something about the absurdly purple prose made me laugh the whole way through. Especially since I actually know enough about the period language used to decipher it easily.

Thank you for the read, good sirs; I don't usually enjoy doujin quite this much.

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Took me too long to read those ..

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THOU!
THOU! THOU!
THOU! THOU!
THOU! THOU!
THOU! THOU!
You angry?

RAMZA! You angry... ...me?

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English? Yes.
Translated? Not really.

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Yeah, think you tried a bit too hard with the Ye Olde English prose here. If it wasn't for the fact that there were already FFT doujins by this artist translated (and my group happened to do one of them), you may have been able to get away with it.

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Just superior! Thanks-a-lot, pal!

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After reading this...Somehow, it makes me want to put a bounty for all FFT Doujins by Baku-bros to be translated in this manner...XD

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wtf is Ramza doing with a girl? he is a ladyboy -_-

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I came for the porn and stayed for the Shakespeare.

@Slobber

Lavian and Alicia were both knights when you start out.

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I've always found these two cute, especially in doujin, even though there's absolutely no hint of their interest in each other in the actual game, with Ramza too busy being gay and all. Mustadio was actually the guy who's interested in her. The only reason why people ship these two so hard was because Agrias was the most viable character with a pretty face after it became clear that Ovelia was not an option.

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