Please, at least romanize Parsee's name correctly. It's clear that the translator here had no clue about the source material, and to add insult to injury, he simply couldn't be arsed to look anything up.
It's kind of like the brown M'n'M test - if the translator couldn't be bothered to know what it is he's doing, you can't expect him to do it properly at all. A few lines are nonsensical, some are garbled and it's generally clear that the translator didn't give a shit.

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nothing like selfcest but the translation with names was... welp

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translated by: ?

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So is this guy as bad as CG_Rascal or worse?

I mean this is pretty bad, not fully cleaning up text bubbles Page 4 is extremely atrocious in this case.

Not knowing the setting, there is a Wiki for Touhou Characters and its NOT hard find!

Then we get Palsey. PALSEY? Even if you went hyper literal with the Kanji it'd be 'Parusi' If he even looked at raw he'd find that her name was tagged as Parsee Mizuhashi! This beyond lazy
Calling her a Hashihime instead of "Bridge Princess" is perfectly fine as that is what she is!
Anyone want to put a bounty on this as maybe LWB might pick this up or someone else who actually gives a shit

Edit: Fun Fact when this was uploaded he didn't even tag her name with the upload.

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Ya know...I was willing to give this the benefit of the doubt..."Yeah so what if the translation's sub-par at least it's in english" I mean hey at least I can read it...

but...

Palsey...

HOW DO YOU EVEN DO THAT!?! I mean honestly how does one translate a Touhou doujin and get it wrong THAT badly? That's almost an impressive feat if not for how horrible it is...

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Lots of bubbles not properly cleaned.

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1st Vol: http://g.e-hentai/g/532296/de8beffc3a/ (untranslated)
2nd Vol: http://g.e-hentai/g/466326/2db9170110/

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