Art = nice!
Sex = hot!
I didn't see any translation credits so I'll assume you did it. The quality looks pretty good to me but I'm not one to judge on translation accuracy since I can't. As for those wondering, the first untranslated sfx on first 8 pages or so are "mm" "nn" "mmh" "mnn" etc basically the "closed mouth sfx" that usually accompanies blowjobs

The rest of the sfxs in the doujins are mainly "ha" and "ah" I believe. The typical sex moans+panting. And my guess for Image11 is the sfx in the mid left panel = Ha-i (yes) since she's asking if they took a lot of photos

Thank you, and look forward to more translated works from you BitByByte!

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Credit to 4chan for translation.

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@NailB: Sometime, feeding a troll is fun.

@Yoposoc: I'd upvote your comment if I could. Instead, I'll just say thanks.

@anallover12: I'm not bitching or getting butthurt because I didn't get to work on it. I'm not that petty and I have tons of other things to work on. I operate on the philosophy that even i*****, the artists deserves proper representation through good translations, and the readers also deserve the same level of quality for the fap material. I'm merely pointing out a faulty translation (or at least part of it). Had Desudesu's version got leaked or 4chan's denizens produced something better, I wouldn't be posting this. Mind you, my critique is only on the translation itself. The edit looks quite good, honestly.

@Slobber: If I had to rate this, I'd give it a 6/10. Granted, I only read a few pages (5 actually) so take it as you will. I was hoping to work on this book myself, but with other projects and this being released, I've lost my drive : (.

Here's a rough sample of the first page.

みんさん改めましてこんにちは
Good Afternoon, everyone, and welcome!
(Literal) Everyone, I'd like to properly greet you.

新田美波です
Nitta Minami here!

今日はいつもお世話になっているスボンサーのみなさんにお礼をするイベントです
Today I'm holding a very special event as thanks to everyone who's been my loyal sponsors. (Personally, I would've went with patrons or fans, but I'm rushing here :D)
(Literal-ish) As for today, this is a thank you event for those sponsors who I'm always indebted to.

最後までたくさん楽しんでいただけるようにがんばります
I will do my very best to make sure you thoroughly enjoy every second of your reward. (Terrible by my standard, but you get the idea)
(Literal-ish) I will do my best so that you will enjoy a lot to the very end.

Yes, I realize I look like an ass by doing this. But I had to say something since I love this artist so much.

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wait, did /d/ translate this?

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@FUKE

I understand completely what you mean. I just speed-translated some non-h story from X-EROS for someone on /a/ and they told me they intended to slap together my translation on and upload it here.
I told him no. If it's going to be released, I would rather have someone retranslate it well. Not on the spot.

@anallover12
Don't say shit unless you've been in our shoes. Seeing half-assed scanlations (a la CGRascal) is the worst. It's really hard to convince anyone to re-scanlate something that has been completely done already.

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FUKE: I'm not sure why you even wasted your time responding to that kid (anallover12). He made a joke of himself here. Responding to him is no better than responding to furniture.

Aside from that I DO see your translation as better. I guess art here makes up for translation.

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Okay, so there's a debate about something going on but I was distracted by the super hot story of a cute but sluty idol who likes having sex with her fans. This translation reads well enough not to distract from the art/story so I'm cool with it.

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