Emua draws the best shit there is.

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Just another dick who can't pick the girl he wants but still bangs both girls and gets a happy end.

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Where the hell are these assertive girls that ask to go over your house for a fuck? Are they just contrived for a plot like this?

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The protagonist in this story isn't just some ordinary guy, but portrayed as the cool, collected character.
Can't blame the girl liking him, if your in the girl's point of view, but liked the realism in this. Obviously the girl you just had sex would pour water on your head if you start having sex with another girl in front of her.

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I feel like there's a good idea here, but it's not fleshed out enough to real get an impact.

Great anal though.

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Why don't he fuck Kanae in the pussy?

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