So which one's the one with the broken English? So I can AVOID it!

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Yes, more Kyouko for the good of the world.
Why the original manga isn't scanlated more yet is beyond me.

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Oh boy, here we go.

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Yay another LWB!

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@Bay K.W. Arde, Who knows, that problem might get fixed soon enough.
@Sushilicious, it was suggested by the translator Masamune that the two versions be done in this matter. in the original, the men are speaking the equivalent of broken Japanese. The engrish version is an attempt to convey the brokenness of their speech patterns in Japanese.

bwuhahaha @ the tag americans ruin everything

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The husband entity is so weak in this series that I have a hard time thinking of it as NTR.

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>There are two versions of this. One with correct grammar, and one with broken English/Japanese.

Is there a reason for having two versions, especially with one in broken English? Is it because there are two Japanese raw versions and you translated both the good and "bad" ones? A bit of clarification would be helpful.

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Wow this is the epitome of accuracy vs fluency.
Props to Masamune for showing the difference ^^
I believe the *other* gallery is the more "accurate version" since it depicts how broken the rapists' Japanese is and conveys the whole language barrier whereas this one is more fap+go friendly.

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wow, this is the series has more translated doujinshis than it normal chapters

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Dhalsim on Page 17.

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I was hoping the one with Engrish would be a joke at how bad CGRascal is at translating.

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LOL thats one fucked way come back from work trip see bunch of dudes gettin nasty with your wife XD thats why you gotta love NTR baby :).

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You can also see Robert Dyson on "[Finecraft69 (Isako Rokuroh)] Miru Mami (Puella Magi Madoka Magica)" at page 21

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The cover is so netorare you can't miss it, heh.

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And another great job from LWB and Funeral of Smiles !
Thanks a bunch guys.
:-)

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good wife, m.A.A.d city
it's okay to hate me

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on page 06 the two guys start talking. the author puts it in perfect Japanese, with a note that reads (In English). So while he put their broken English / poor Japanese in Engrish, he decided to put the perfect English in perfect Japanese. Kyoko, however, doesn't understand any of it. So the question became: "how do we show that they're fluently speaking a different language and convey the lack of understanding?" Well. I could have put it in Spanish or Italian or something, but I think keeping just that one box in Japanese might also do it. Here it's just in English with a sign that says it's in English.

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Who's that on the lower-left of page 18 ?

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Finecraft AND NTR? Im so glad the world didn't end.

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For the engrish version, why use actual engrish to portray the lack of speech skills of the men instead of plain poor english ?

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Man that dark skinned guy on the cover just gives me the creeps. *shudder*

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Don't you hate it when an artist you love starts making shit you hate?
I really liked this guys shota, and bestiality works, but I have never been a fan of the whole "black people drug and rape a nice asian/white girl" plotline.
It is an overused cliche, and it seems to be all he is doing anymore.

That being said the art is still fine, the plot just isn't really my cup of tea.

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Lol Dhalsim ahahha

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More Cheating Wifey !!

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Man.. after watching this.. now I realise all hentai is just rape.. :/ fuck this. I'm done.

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@GatakiribaCombo: She is gang raped by 6 men, some of which are black... and what you get from this is "black guys like raping white women"?

the racism is all in your head

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