Kinda weird but otherwise looks wonderful (just be a pain in the ass to edit)

Base +14, Ham Sandwich +9, Rei-Tenshi +35, ShizukaOnna23 +7, Firedon +7, Hentai2Go +7, flamedance58 +9, danixxx +30, grumpymal +29, Eirain +8, eyelezz +13, unknownshadows +1

I'm a little O_o but more O_O and :D.

Base +8, Firedon +7, Hentai2Go +7, grumpymal +29, eyelezz +13, unknownshadows +1

Haha, tentacle love instead of rape.
Awesome!

Base +4, Firedon +7, EroSeninJiraiya +12, Hentai2Go +7, grumpymal +29, eyelezz +13, unknownshadows +1

P2, eat me? Okay. I want to be a part of you too.

Fap fap.

Base +11, unknownshadows +1

This is so lovely!

Base +10, unknownshadows +1

Tentacle LOVE! how sweet :D

Base +7, grumpymal +29, CountPacula +10, unknownshadows +1

PAGE１
こんな暑い日は海に漂う水母になりたい
柔らかで冷たい肌に触れたい
私はあなたと今ひとつになりたい
osuch a hot day
to be jellyfish floating in the sea
to touch the cold, soft skin
to be with you and become a whole
水中をたゆたう少女の夢と想いと現実と
With a dream and thought,
and the reality of a girl floating rootlessly in
the water
PAGE2
ねぇお邪魔してもいいかしら
Hey, may I come?
まるでここは母の胎内
Here is the womb of mother, entirely
わぁステキ
Ooh, it is wonderful
そっと私を包むように
柔らかく出迎えてくわるのね
softly, gently,
to wrap me up quietly
捕食する
EAT　ME
フフいいのよ
heh heh　pretty good
あなたの身体の一部になれるのなら
私なにも躊躇しないわ
no hesitation if I become a part of your body
PAGE3
はううつ
ahh
そうきて
come on
うれしい
ecstacy
あなたが私を求めてる
You desire me
はいってくるっ
come inside me
あスゴイ
Oh, it is great
そんな所まで
so deep
くゥゥ
hahhhhh
PAGE4
あぁ
hah
完全に私あなたに今
のっとられちゃっ
My heart was captured by you completely
たあ
owha
ふあアツ
ahhhhh
ふ深い
so deep
どんどん奥に侵入してくるツ
deeper and deeper
そんなに焦らないで
Do not get impatient so much
もつとゆつくり
Be patient
Don't rush
PAGE5
感じる
so feel
あぁ
ahhh
スゴい
great
注入してくる
cum inside so much
なにか熱いのがたくさん
some hot stuff come inside me
そんなイツキに
even touching my womb
ムり
i can not take this
PAGE6
うまって私の膣内に
cum inside my pussy
カワイイ
赤ちゃん
cute baby
PAGE7
あなたは自らの身体を犠牲にしてまで
私の身体に未来を託したのね
you sacrifice yourself commit your future to my
いいわ
ok
それでもあなたは
私の胎内で生きるもの
you still live in my womb
私はあなたを産むわ
i will give brith to you
PAGE8
やガて時は巡り
Time flees
彼は使命を全うして
私の中に溶けて消えていったけれど
after having accomplished the task
he melted in me and disappeared

遺された私たちは
皆で仲良く
暮らしていきました
your children
have a nice life

そんなとある夏の日の淡い夢
A Summer Day's Dream
この男じや叶えられない夢よね
the guy unable to realize
なあ
hey
随分ウツ卜リ寝てたな
you slept like a baby
おまえ
そんなに良かった
you feel so comforty?

Base +4, Doordevil +7

Okano's stuff often seems to deal with consumption and melding. A nice change from typical vore.

Base +9

Great idea, I hope the authors redouble their efforts.

Base +3