Incredibly difficult to follow to me, but not necessarily because of the translation.

Base +10

The draw, I remember Genshiken Characters
"Anyway my manga are about gangbangs an netorare and it doesn´t seem to be what you are looking for." meanwhile in Japan JIN-sensei playing MW3
"And I Did´t manage to become a Wizard" joke from Hanagai, if you're a virgin at 30 years old, you become a Wizard

Base +7, luminisk +8, amt +7, Kantzakolt +8, enyoeos -8, Zaolao +7

Good works. The girl is cute.

Base +5, mumei-chan +6

I loved it, I find it sexy and loving :)
*****

Base +8

So many things in this manga appeal to me.

I love it, thanks so much.

Base +6

I was just about to give up on Hentai until I read this. Nice pick. One constructive criticism, I wouldn't use "LOL", I'd just use a "Heh heh" or something.

Base +1, wertweet +9

This I really liked and enjoyed, for both the H and for the story. The start of the story and the end were rather nice touches.
It is said that an artist draws inspiration from real life and sometimes incorporates such things in their work, this kind of doing that I really like.

Base +9