We are aware that there is another translation done, however at request we translated our own version and edited it ourselves. Thanks in advance.

You guys are some real troopers, when I did this one I could kinda see my soul seeping away.

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Black Dog's running out of stands to name his doujins after.

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@angrybull: There are plenty more in Steel Ball Run.

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font for the speech bubbles sucks. it's harder to read them. The font in the text boxes should be used for the speech bubbles and the shitty speech bubble squiggly font should be used for things like surprises, actions, or short moans.

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"At request". I'd like to hear the requester rationale; what was wrong with the existing translation?

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""At request". I'd like to hear the requester rationale; what was wrong with the existing translation?"

How about this was being worked on before the other came out (and I know firsthand this is the case)

I'd figure they just decided to go through with it anyway.

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That "factbox" in the page 19 is hilarious, BTW anybody knows in which Black Dog book happens the stuff with the other sailors of the page 15?
Overall is a very good work, the NTResque feeling of the first part was a very good touch, now the second part, well was (at least to me) a bit weird but is not bad either.

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@psicomenace
BTW anybody knows in which Black Dog book happens the stuff with the other sailors of the page 15?

its a doujin from Black Dog titled "Beach Boy"

so the story goes :
Pearl Jam > Beach Boy > Pearl jam 2

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