Taken & translated from this: http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/g/224489/7e5b065e2a/

In addition to my usual excuses for my meagre skills as far as translating, editing, etc goes, I owe an additional apology here, as I finished this one in a bit of a hurry, so my work here may appear a bit more crude than usually... Can't be helped though, as things are somewhat busy at this time of the year...

Also, I'm not sure I got the translation of the title right <_<

wow..what a pussy.

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Shirou.... Just take the damn pills of Viagra!!!!!!!!!!

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Thank you for translating this! Really nice to see some Junkin translated.

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Everything's fine. Could have used some proofreading if you weren't in a rush. Regarding the title, 舞う as "dance" seems fine. "Flutter" is an option, but I think "dance" is the better choice too.

Also, I cracked up at the "Shirou kept using the wrong hole" bit. Probably why she's been a virgin.

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So Shirou, who's entire character is about screwing logic or common sense and being a hero at any costs, doesn't do a damn think to save Rin.
Yeah, ok, sure.

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awesome stuff but is there a torrent?

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If it wasn't for the fact Shinji wasn't an already established asshole this would've been much more rage inducing. Frankly the existence of something like this is hilarious.

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shinji looks like an old man

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Agreed, this needs to be Torrented!

Well, we have a Torrent now.
How long until people start asking for Seeds? ^_^

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Zakuzelo: Well now, remember that Shirou is all about "wanting others to be happy" - and so, if Rin has found her, uh... Happiness in slavery, then maybe he feels that he has no choice but to accept that, as long as she's happy? <_<

McRawr: I don't think the artist is a Shinji fan or anything - it's probably jsut that there's just a very few people in Fate/Stay who'd actually do soemthing like this, so unless you want to make Original Characters for it, the obvious solution is to use what "bastards" that are already available. Thus, for a darker kind of story like this, Shinji and Caster (and maybe Zouken and Kotomine) would appear as the natural choices for this. Unless, as I said, you want to make Original Characters...

Knoloa: I'm working on it, but hasn't gotten very far yet.

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probably wouldn't hate this so bad if it wasn't so stupid. NTR doesn't normally bother me, but it's such a twist of something that is already hentai. The worst of it is Shinji, he's a whiny brat, though a rapist; he isn't some alpha male, he's the opposite. This was made by a shinji lover or someone just wanting shock value. for as long as it was, they could have at least came up with a decent corruption plot. art is horrible, unless you are a cuckolding fetishist there is nothing redeeming about this.

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someone's gotta translate Daraku no Ou, the sequel...
I'm dying for N/TR here...

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Hmm... First time reading a netorare / NTR. Makes me want to http://postimage.org/image/g4x7gu0hx/

I'm going to go see if I can blacklist that tag in my user preferences now.

P.S. I remember there being something in the story that talked about shinji being really popular with the female half of the student body. I'm guessing it's due to all that "practice" on sakura.

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@DarkSpooky Kotomine doesn't care about sex one bit... His only pleasure is suffering, and his kind of evil is all about corrupting goodness in a very twisted way or doing something very ironic, ask poor Kariya or him giving the dagger who murdered Tokiomi to Rin. Anyway, raping someone is very un-Kotomine, because it's very straightforward, simple and damn vulgar...

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I wonder if Daraku no Ou will also get translated.

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