Posted on 14 November 2011, 15:47 UTC by
DarkSpooky
Saw this lying around here: http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/g/405576/82e714659d/ so far untranslated into english and couldn't resist putting my meagre skills into making it available into english. :)
And now for the usual stuff: As implied above, I'm no pro-translator, no pro at editing/working images in Paint and English isn't my first language, so if there's errors relating to any of these three issuses: sorry, but that's to be expected - I try to do my best though. Well, enjoy!
Edit: Changed page 18 + 22, as they had errors to'em. Sorry for not noticing it, I blame it on my sleepy state when I posted'em :(
Edit 2: Change to the RIGHT page 18 + 22 XD
Edit 3 *sigh* Just discovered that page 20-21 + 28-29 were in the wrong order. Corrected.. -_-
Posted on 14 November 2011, 07:16 UTC by
omfglol
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This is why Kodaka went out with Sena instead... beside he's still got 2 loli, a reverse-trap maid, and a fujoshi at his disposal...
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Posted on 14 November 2011, 19:21 UTC by
sekirei07
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Eh, this is pretty weak for an NTR story and for a Friends story.
Characters are barely recognizable, besides there names one would never know this has anything to do with friends.
The "Master" we know literally nothing about and the whole "hypnosis" thing is way too abstract, what is the medium he is using? Is it an object? a key word? It seems more like psychokinesis then anything since he can freeze people with no setup or key word.
A good NTR needs to be remotely tangent to the story to really create that sense of it could actually happen. With harem series especially if you don't get all the girls, especially the most favorite one (Sena) then people won't rage well.
A good NTR story for this gal would be:
10 years prior when she was going to see him dressed as a girl before he left town she gets captured by a molester and blackmailed/threaten into a sex slave. Fast forward 10 years and the story goes on as normal but the dark side of it is the molester with the help of Yozora begins to make the other girls of the club into sex slaves as well behind Kosada's back.
I think that would make a much more interesting series.
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Posted on 14 November 2011, 17:42 UTC by
yuetchi
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ability-to-draw wise, this art is interesting
accuracy-to-actual-characters wise, its pretty bad
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So do Meat fanboys annoy anyone else? I swear they put the damn thing on a Pedestal and it's really annoying. Yozora is kind of a bitch yeah, but she has her reasons for why she's like that but no one seems to ever give a damn and insists that she's just a bitch "because" unlike Meat who they worship. It's so damn annoying, I don't mind if someone likes Meat better then Yozoroa but it pisses me off to see so many people just call her a Bitch without trying to understand why she's like that and then praise Meat.
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Posted on 14 November 2011, 16:51 UTC by
youngfolk
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I usually don't like NTR, but for some reason I couldn't care less about this one. It's probably because I can't stand Yozora & think she's a bitch, especially compared to 2D loving, loli hugging Sena.
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Posted on 14 November 2011, 20:08 UTC by
Corrlate
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Meat was going to win anyway this really isn't even ntr.
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Posted on 11 December 2011, 03:38 UTC by
AllenNoah
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Anyone else think the "Master" looked like the Major from Hellsing?
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@Allen Noah - actually, he reminds me of Gabe Newell.
also these facial expressions are simply amazing.
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Posted on 14 November 2011, 19:24 UTC by
Sharkface
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This would be amazing if it were not so over-censored.
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the new posting has 18 and 22 not translated btw
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Posted on 14 November 2011, 09:06 UTC by
VentoNero
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I fucking love you for translating this. My penis and I thank you deeply.
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