The editing is atrocious... who in their right mind would PAY for this if other groups do a way better job for the same money...?

Base +6, nyfair +15, Blazephlozard -7, Darkness Despair Destruction -9, fine17 -3, komander -6, bergil -6, dormantron -7, GhostStalker -6, Satoshi｡｡｡ -9, Palaxius +7, OP444 -8, Kudowafu +16, and 8 more...

Your overreacting, there's wayyyy worse edits out there; i.e white boxes, times new roman/comic sans, poor grammar, etc

Base +7, Blazephlozard +7, PrivateEyes +7, KJacket +13, Darkness Despair Destruction +9, mugen_darkness +7, D1g1tal +5, danixxx +30, Kudowafu -16, ballcock +2, GhostStalker +7, CPR +9, dirtyhairry +5, and 2 more...

Dude, are you dissing saha? He/She does shit some people wouldn't even touch, and does it well.

The original had text directly over the pages too, because takeda-san was being an idiot that day, so it isn't the editer's fault.

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I wonder why these ntr'd males never throw the girl off.. and proceed to stomp the other guy's face
in until its recognizeable, and continue until theres nothing left..
Once Id like to see an NTR ending like...
Main guy walks in on the NTR scene, kills the other bastard, then throws the gift on the floor
in front of the girl/kills himself splattering the blood all over the mind broken female..
then she ends up in a padded room only remembering the loss of the main guy.

Base +9, Zezibesh -6