Its good, if you can overlook Kurisu´s unnaturally boney build.

Also, a divergance of 9,9% is probably so catastrophic that none of these characters act in any canon way, so... i`m not looking forward for a translation.

@ BlickWinkel: True, but if the doujin fails in the erotic department (For me, at least, due to the boney looking girls... even Mayuri, being curvy and all, has her hipjoints and ribcage exposed in some scenes, and by canon, she`s supposed to be eating a lot on regular basis), then i would still be satisfied if it had a good story. But this has neither.

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Who the hell reads doujins and looks for whether or not "it would fit within the canon"? it's porn made for getting off to. Sure characters acting exactly like they do in the series itself can be nice, but it shouldn't be used for a basis as to whether or not a doujin is good.

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scanne de chiotte!!!

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