Happy Halloween I guess, this should be what I could consider the story arc of this and then it will start something I really hate, what is that? it is when Nisino stopped doing uncensored versions of it because Pixiv/Fanbox staff most likely found out and told him to stop it and he cant be fucked to upload on twitter or literally anywhere else so from this point onwards stuff will come out horrible censored and if it wasnt because this is a commission, I wouldnt have liked to continue because of have an initially uncensored work go censored, be grateful to aguywithaname for making this series be translated in the first place.

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The art and dialogue (don't know if it's the translation or the actual raw dialogue) are a bit rough around the edges but the story is good, more incest stories are always welcomed

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the original raw dialogue is rather this level of cringe type stuff and I personally dont feel like change it into something less cringe since it feels I would be rewriting it at that point, Luxsumildo works for example also have this cringe as fuck type dialogue (and the overusage of the word bitch and such) that even I was like bro, what the fuck this hardly makes sense in english so I actually reworded it enough to make sense..... manhwa artists and their stories are.... a special type....

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@HKE even some bubbles seems odd, i mean, sometimes it's hard to know who is speaking to whom and if the person is actually speaking or actually thinking, but yeah, aside from that there are some very odd choices of dialogue indeed, ohh well, at least the incest is good tho
Never read any Luxsumildo works, but good to know tho

Edit: there is a mistake on PG 95 middle right, the text is duplicated there

Last edited on 31 October 2024, 13:26.

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Surprisingly good tbh.

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