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[Kuroshiba Suko] TS Onii-chan ga Futanari Imouto ni Mesuochi Saserareru Hanashi [English] [ushirotranslations] [Digital]

[くろしばすこ] TSお兄ちゃんがフタナリ妹に女堕ちさせられる話 [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2024-10-26 16:58
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Language:English  TR
File Size:422.0 MiB
Length:52 pages
Favorited:456 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.43

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Posted on 26 October 2024, 16:58 by:   ushirotranslations     PM
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Posted on 26 October 2024, 19:12 by:   RigenZ     PM
Score +38
Interesting...Where did the sister get those pills, considering their life conditions?
Posted on 26 October 2024, 19:29 by:   mlembug     PM
Score +33
> Thanks for reading my second ever translation

If you don't mind, I'll be sharing some feedback:
Manga Temple is a terrible font, the letter shapes are bad, it has inconsistent weight, which not only makes it hard to read, it looks terrible when downscaled. Even Anime Ace is better (which honestly is also pretty bad, so I wouldn't use this one either). I recommend using another one. Go to mangadex forums and find the thread named Scanlation Font resource and download the font pack from there.
The typesetting could be improved in other ways, the text should be centered both horizontally and vertically and ideally not touch the bubbles. Ideally the shape of the text should somewhat follow the shape of the bubble, which is generally hard to do when you do not control the shape of the bubble, but in some cases the shape could be improved by moving some words around (like page 4: I may be / a / beautiful -> I may / be a / beautiful)
Last edited on 26 October 2024, 22:09.
Posted on 26 October 2024, 19:43 by:   ushirotranslations     PM
Score +26
Thank you for your feedback I will take it on board for my next translation!
Posted on 26 October 2024, 20:10 by:   ast4     PM
Score +79
Not translating oniichan is fine but yabai and hora is too far.
And ya I hate manga temple too lol. It does have manga in it's name so its a top result when you search for manga fonts but it's too ugly to use as the main font.

I do like this work a lot though, especially the art.
Although I hate it when they do this step sister nonsense.
Just feels like the author is too cowardly to do actual incest.
Posted on 27 October 2024, 03:21 by:   masterzelda123     PM
Score +7
@RigenZ
Really? Where she got the pills is your question? Not the impossibility of the drug?
Where and how are endless in their possibilities.
Some wacked out scientist, some evil corp, some less evil corp, some mega rich person, a government. any of them or someone else for the lolz or research, or personal gain.

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