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Japanese (RAW): http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/g/2392763/108596f436/
Chinese (Translation): http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2547003/b0fe8f15b3/
Chinese (Translation): http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/3048372/97284c949c/
Korean (Translation): http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2186377/a3e6dceabc/

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Too cute. I'll be rooting for them!

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p1. Almost already -> redundant. I mean, you got page 2 right; why is p1 redundant and page 2 correct lol. Inconsistent.
p5. Haven't you used it for a long time? -> I feel this one doesn't make much sense based on the flow of the dialog. Someone with extensive JPTL knowledge should chime in here.
p11. Your sucking is so strong -> wut?
p13. It feels good to have my private parts messed so hard...
p14. I wonder what will happen if he insert a real penis
p14. Finally, the real sex
p17. By the way, are you okay with your nosebleeds? -> awkward sentence, bordering into nonsensical
p20. ...you're nosebleeding! -> Even Firefox marks "nosebleeding" as an erroneous word.

There are some minor grammar errors (like "there, your ass") but I'm going to ignore them. IMO get a better QC/editor preferably that's at least B2. If you're the editor as well as the TL, maybe run your script through Grammarly first.

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>35 y.o
>broccoli hair

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I'm wondering to myself if that could work in real life...

*In my mind*
Dark angel: "yes do it... you can try... reality is sometimes better than fiction..."
White angel: "nah... don't listen to him... you know that it could never work.... no chance of happening"
Dark angel: "well as you know... probability is not zero but what you could end up with can also be not a woman..cough...cough someone identifying as one..."
White angel: "...."
Me: "...."

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"no I can't, unless it's a prince"

Cat lady in the making.

Last edited on 28 September 2024, 21:21.

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Tinder should licence this as advertising.

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