C- on your esl translation project
cute kiyo

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Don't translate stuff into languages you can't speak or read.

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yeah sorry man, this is a trainwreck translation from word bubble 1

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I'm about to V/10

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Page 1:
Hmph Sure thing and then untranslated. Based on the fact you TL'd ma as the literal まぁ, I'm 99% sure going forward this is MTL. Not even an N4 would make this mistake.
た あ are untranslated.
Whoa, there it is, woohoo! ....................................uh huh.
まあ汗が untranslated

Page 2:
It seems that you are indeed destined to be with your husband...!
Perspective is completely wrong.
せーんぱい untranslated
あそぼー untranslated

Page 3:
ノー untranslated
>translating watakushi as being fabulous as I am
You have no grasp of olde speake whatsoever, and completely missed the mark with Kiyohime's personality, diction, manner of speech or cadence.
しかも嘘無く untranslated
ノータッチ untranslated

I'm not continuing, this shit is brainrot.

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