A new series this time based on the anime "darling in franxx" the series will refer mainly to the characters from this anime than to the events themselves.

This time, however, the series will not contain any threads with the use of magic, I want to try something new.

Chapters:
Chapter 1 - 1
Chapter 2 - 76
Chapter 3 - 150
Chapter 4 - 223
Chapter 5 - 297
Chapter 6 - 369
Chapter 7 - 442
Chapter 9 - 589
Chapter 10 - 652
Chapter 11 - 741
Chapter 12 - 811
Chapter 13 - 883
Chapter 14 - 956
Chapter 15 - 1028
If you like what I do, join me as a patron and you will get early access to the next parts.
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You can also view my other works absolutely free on Deviantart.
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All 3D galleries go to "Misc" category regardless of other factors.

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Okay, corrected.

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Ron512 deslivered several decent Genderbending stories, can't they get their own author tag?.

On the matter of the story, where do they find all these androphobic rich genderbending aunts and why don't I have one?

At least she looks a tad more human this time and even decent to boys on the surface at least.

True fantasy stuff is the director actually caring about the bullying problems in his school.

Where do all these feminizing all powerful aunts come from? Mine juste collect taxes.

Last edited on 23 October 2022, 22:23.

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the mask covering the entire face was a weird decision ngl

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I also noticed this, which is why I didn't use it anymore.

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Between the stilted dialogue, mediocre composition and atrocious pacing, decent is not what I would call Ron512's work. That's without going into the plot that, apart from having every character act horribly OOC, is so cookie cutter that an AI might come up with something more original.

The best thing I can say about them is that they are a prolific artist that's better known for quantity over quality.

If you cut down the number of pages by half and spend twice as long on each page, the result would be way better.

Last edited on 02 January 2023, 03:12.

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Tbh its just, like a esl speaker wrote this through and through. Mistaking plurals, bad tenses, missing possession. Like, god why...

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Pages 17 and 18 are in the wrong order.

Also page 10… how the fuck this bitch doesn’t remember the name of her own nephew?

I didn’t get past page 22.

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Thanks, I indeed switched the order of the pages.

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The most annoying part is all those "hehe". People don't talk like that! They might write like that if they can't talk normally.

Also Pesel is only in Poland afaik

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Dear Ron512

I wanted to thank you so much for this wonderfull story !!
I love it !!!
Regards,
Gwen

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