https://ouo.io/awKCw8n
https://gplinks.co/MVgqO3

Grammar is... a wee bit rough. The first five pages look like a machine translation, but the cake is in page 7, where the line says the opposite of what it should have said: with she asking him "aren't we attracted to you?" instead of, say, "aren't we attractive for you?" or "aren't you attracted to us?".
Either is missing a "translated" tag or is missing a "rough grammar" tag.

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Are we gonna talk about the mouths in page 8?

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Forget the mouth thing. Are we going to talk about the sudden shift in art style?

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