003
OG: 俺は取島ルイト現役の警察官だ
TL: "I'm an active police officer"
ED: missing name

005
OG: そんな…！
TL: "Son'na...!"
ED: this is just romanized

OG: 急に飛びついて来ないでくれる？
TL: "Could you please not jump and come close to me?"
ED: missing first part of line

006
OG: １か月言いなりになれば解放してくれるんじゃなかったのか．．．？
TL: "1 month...wouldn't I have to let you go if you did as I said...?"
ED: wrong speaker

OG: 翌朝
TL: N/A

007
OG: 目覚めはどうかしら？
TL: "How are you waking up?"
ED: she's wondering how Rui's awakening was

OG: もう絶対に元の生活に戻れないような身体になっちゃえば諦めもつくんじゃないかって思ったのよ
TL: "I feel like you'll never be able to go back to your old life. I thought that if you became a girl, you might be able to give up."
ED: she's saying that if Rui became unable to return to her old life then she would accept her new body

OG: この娘が例の子？
TL: "Is this girl your example?"
ED: she's asking if Rui is the girl Mizuki mentioned

008
OG: すごいわ！投薬だけなのにＢカップくらいに育ってる！
TL: "That's amazing! Even though you only took medication, my size has grown toabout[sic] a B cup size!"
ED: she's talking about Rui

OG: 依頼通りＨカップくらいでいいかしら？
TL: "Is it okay to have an H cup as requested?
ED: she's asking if she should make Rui an H cup

009
OG: もちろん正規の手段ではないんだけれど♥
TL: "Of course, it's not the official method ♡"
ED: she's saying it's not an established method

etc

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