You might have wanted someone to proofread your thee'in and thou'in and such, cuz there are a lot of them in the wrong forms. Also, -eth goes on verbs and not anything else, so "backeth" is nonsense. You would write "Thinketh back", for instance. Not sure about why you would do all the apostrophe-ommitted vowels, or the random "T" in the middle of some of her sentences.