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Base +65, Gitami +14

The story of a protagonist who realized it could have been him the one with his tomboy childhood friend but lost her to another friend who actually worked his best to make the girl fall for him.
The end could have been worked better IMO; CHF was suspicious of MC's late behavior (MC's found her boyfriend's camera who he lost) so after ringing his place again and again she invited herself and caught him watching the videos, then just runs and passes out (lol, why?) And it ends.

The story of a protagonist who realized it could have been him the one with his tomboy childhood friend but lost her to another friend who actually worked his best to make the girl fall for him.
The end could have been worked better IMO; CHF was suspicious of MC's late behavior (MC's found her boyfriend's camera who he lost) so after ringing his place again and again she invited herself and caught him watching the videos, then just runs and passes out (lol, why?) And it ends

I don't get the author's afterwords. Is it complete or not yet?
At least here I understand he was been with poor health so she could complete it in time and released the work as rough sketches.

Base +20, Gitami +14

This is a ntr I can get behind. No rape. No blackmail. Just genuine effort. It seems he wanted to do more with the story but, couldn't do to health reasons. It seems he may add more in the future.

Base +8

以前名字叫マラックマ，幾年沒消息還以為不畫了

Base +10