Page 5: ' Is it how they call grandma' -> 'Is that what they call Grandma' Page 6: 'Since you were looking at my breast' -> 'Since you were looking at my breasts' Page 10: 'My crotch is often aroused' This might be my own lack of knowledge showing, but it feels odd to read. Page 25: 'Sex after some time since the last...' -> see above.
She seems to have a lot of weird preconceptions about virgins. Only virgins get a boner from looking at tits, virgins don't know how condoms work, virgins aren't eager to fondle tits, etc.
Guess that's what you get for going to an all girls' school.
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