RAW: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1884323/d77c8c5b55/

Chinese translation: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1889362/e7f8fbdcd7/

Korean translation: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2427972/77b970224b/

Base +37

1. You're using the wrong 1280x downsized resolution of the images. Download the archive or the non-downsized torrent (righr side.)
2. Manga Temple is an awful ugly font. Use something else. Here's suggestions for catch-all fonts: CCVictorySpeech, Wild Words, Spinner Rack BB.
3. I didn't check the TL, but this reads like it was machine translated.
4. You need to redraw, not just slap English text on top of Japanese text and call it a day.
5. Read all of this.

General: https://gplinks.co/GV06EZhp
Typesetting: https://ouo.io/TXjsd1
Redrawing: https://gplinks.co/MVgqO3

Base +25, darkwing42 +50, DragonClaw +9, delborg +20, Fills +6, as102 +13, Spooky Ghost Butts +8, Zakuzelo +14, Th3 Sl0th +6, darkpenetrator69 +13, errata +14

Group tag goes in the mixed category

Base +8

miniguy tag should be removed, small kappa is a monster not a miniguy

Base +6, errata +14

Thanks for the tips guys, will re-work on this manga and will be uploading a new version.

As for the tags, sorry, as of now I don't have the points to vote down the tags, but as soon as I get them, will be updating.

Base +1, SPTKC +6, Nonohara +7, errata +14

Awesome!! This is a treat looking forward to the sequel🤩

Base +6