This is my first hentai manga.
It´s called C.R.R.A.P
Cuase it´s crap...
So trolls, don´t vote if you don´t like it.

This is my real pics http://g.e-hentai/g/265239/854dee8a53/

Rating: (16)
Average: 1.16

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Base +7, KayKhan +4, 666zarike -1

What is this I don't even...

Base +6, KayKhan +4, sparkerboi1 -4, HabaneroJim -6, caveman84 -2, Master Fapper -7, Aaron.Y -24

Not bad. If you draw Futa on Female or Futa/Futa, I'd rate higher. You draw cocks well enough.

Base +6, sparkerboi1 +4, kinggannon -6, 666zarike +1, HabaneroJim +6, AlgreinRa +1, Master Fapper -7, Kurama_07 -6

good i would like to see an extension though

Base +5, sparkerboi1 +4, 666zarike +1, HabaneroJim +6, dart_ace2ace +8, Master Fapper +7

While this may not be the greatest work of art I've seen, I think you have potential, and practice makes perfect, after all. Try to draw some background around the characters and clean up your lines. :)

Base +23, sparkerboi1 +4, 666zarike +1, HabaneroJim +6, AlgreinRa +1, dart_ace2ace +8, Master Fapper +7, chocobeez +1

I would disagree with Morter on the kink, and say you should stick to futa and male (although I'm not a huge fan of the femdom), but you're the one doing the work. Do what you wish.

Perhaps this was not the best place to post it though, it will *certainly* get exposure posted here, but not the actual exposure and critique you need. I don't know jack about art, so I can't help you much. Some background and paneling would be nice.

Draw like crazy if you want to get better, practice helps.

Base +8, 666zarike +1, Master Fapper +7

pretty good. i wish it was longer though.

Base +1, Master Fapper +7, cyrax17 +6

I see your skills improving in your future. But it's not too bad.

Base +7, Necronomicron -11