My first translation work.
If you spot any errors please write in the comments.
I am eager to correct them.
I am still learning japanease so please correct me if I made any errors.

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You should at the very least change the font to something that's more appropriate to this medium. I suggest using the font 'Wild Words' or 'Manga Temple'.

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I appreciate the feedback! :)
Will look into some other font type.

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Not really an error per se, but people don't generally say "How are you, older Sister?" in English, so most translators just leave that as "How are you, Onee-chan?"
All those mentions of older/elder/big sister when speaking directly to her (ie "My big sister is forgetful" is fine, but "Big Sister, did you forget something?" isn't) would be better kept as Onee-chan to look less weird

Beyond that, many thanks for the translation!

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Is that AI decensoring I see?

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Don't use Manga Temple. What an awful suggestion.

Wild Words, CCVictorySpeech, Spinner Rack BB, Richard Starkings are all good catch-all starter fonts.

More general advice: translation isn't something a beginner should attempt, especially since it's obvious English isn't your first language either.

Also, read all of this:

General: https://gplinks.co/2AMykE
Typesetting: https://ouo.io/h9dpMq
Redrawing: https://ouo.io/Nm9eU7
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

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It's good to hear that the author is working on a sequel.

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