[RAW] http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/s/a2afeb088d/2660779-420

Perverted women who let loose are among my favourite genders.

Base +8, gotdajuice +6, Dooderz -8, 44inf +6, Vormik +7

He stuck his dick in right after the other guy came in the same hole. That's kinda gay ... or they're simply very good friends, I guess 😅.

Base +10, AhKai +5, DOIHI3 +6, SaiMasterFag -8, memeboy333 -7

Hole brothers share a sacred bond.

Base +6, gotdajuice +6, knucklesluigi +7, darkrider1 +9, 44inf +6, DOIHI3 +6, propanoate +6, SaiMasterFag -8

Thx for TL this one, not too many eng of this artist especially a new one.

Base +10

title/01: tomboy [..] want
- article missing?
- third person or participle
=> a tomboy [...] wants / tomboy [...] wanting
06: who wanted
- incoherent tense: yet to change? => who wants
08: those tits [...] it looks [...] it's [...] it makes
- inconsistent number => those tits [...] they look [...] they're [...] they make
09: i would [...] if you wouldn't
- conditional => i would [...] if you don't
10: knowing
- incoherent: possible future => learning
10: his childhood friend masturbates [...] i'm sure captain [...] how perverted you are
- sentence before the reference => the captain's childhood friend masturbates [...] i'm sure he [...] how perverted you are
- alternatively, swap the sentences => i'm sure captain [...] how perverted his childhood friend is, masturbating [...]
11: it's so soft
- referencing the breasts, so plural => they're so soft
12: your pussy already sopping wet
- verb missing => your pussy is already sopping wet
15: your pussy gripping
- verb missing => your pussy is gripping
16: creampie while kissing i love this
- Japanese syntax => i love coming inside while kissing
- alternatively => creampie while kissing feels so good / creampie while kissing is awesome
17: that feels good
- past deed? => that felt good
17: you really cum
- past deed => did you really cum / you really came
18: dick case
- alternatively? => dick sleeve / cock sleeve
19: she sucked [...] she had forgotten [...] she was being fucked
- inconsistent tense with the rest => she is sucking [...] she has forgotten [...] she is being fucked
20: The semen on my face. It's so hot.
- Japanese syntax => The semen on my face is so hot.
21: what would you do if i had [...] happened
- hypothetical future => what would you do if i have [...] happens / what will you do if i have [...] happens
21: the one who [...] their
- likely a single male => the one who [...] his

Base +8, Nitram Nede +11, bloopypoo +8, pollaco -11

That tomboy was made to be COACHED. What is this blasphemy.

Base +6

The most unrealistic part of this is her tiring out the male club members on the field.. It doesn't happen. Guys are both faster and have more stamina, and not only a little more.

Base +11, SaiMasterFag -8, meloncheck -6, Difer -6