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(C102) [Mochi-ya (Yonekura)] Koukando Bugtteru | Bugged Relationship (Goddess of Victory: Nikke) [English]

(C102) [もち屋 (米蔵)] 好感度バグってる (勝利の女神:NIKKE) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2023-08-20 11:46
Parent:2648839
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Language:English  TR
File Size:125.1 MB
Length:22 pages
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Average: 4.59

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Posted on 20 August 2023, 11:46 by:   HyzQuadriceps     PM
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It's my first translation... I'f there are any errors, let me know!
Posted on 19 August 2023, 14:06 by:   Fatesifaeve     PM
Score +84
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Posted on 19 August 2023, 14:36 by:   gh7734     PM
Score +37
@HyzQuadriceps
P 4
Text on upper right panel. Perhaps a thicker white stroke? Or maybe just move all the text higher and use white text instead?
Text is a bit hard to see but that might just be me.
P 18
"I'm not making weird sounds, am I?"
Use question mark, not exclamation mark, as it's supposed to be a question.
P 22
BOTTOMLESS... you typo'd with BOTTOMTLESS

Don't know about translation accuracy but I can say it doesn't look like a rewrite at least. Nice work overall. Better than stuff that gets tagged with rough grammar.
Posted on 19 August 2023, 16:10 by:   HyzQuadriceps     PM
Score +6
@gh7734
Thanks for the review.
I reread multiple time the comic and I didn't notice the typo...
For the question mark, In the original there's an exclamation mark instead and I was misled
Posted on 19 August 2023, 17:26 by:   cutegyaru     PM
Score +42
1. I wouldn't add SFX translations in the margins. That's something that was done years ago when scanlators didn't know better. Unless you're going to clean, redraw, and then letter SFX, don't bother with them.
2. Your white stroke is often too small here. Compare to JP.

By the way, you can update your galleries.
Posted on 19 August 2023, 22:05 by:   Xerxes555555     PM
Score +5
@HyzQuadriceps Ay it's great on my end and thank you for translating !
Posted on 20 August 2023, 02:45 by:   DiaStarkLordoftheBed     PM
Score +7
That bikini really pushed Anis into the moon.
Posted on 20 August 2023, 04:15 by:   Yefta     PM
Score +6
Spoi Summer Anis and Shikicum almost had sex in her bond story until she get distracted by something (Shikicum did it with bikini Helm until morning tho) so having this doujin was a bless.
Posted on 20 August 2023, 09:03 by:   Gads     PM
Score +6
@Yefta
on what chapter or event did shikicum had seggs with summer helm?
Posted on 20 August 2023, 13:00 by:   HyzQuadriceps     PM
Score +6
@cutegyaru
I was going to clean, translate and letter the SFXs but the hardest part was to translate the onomatopoeia, I found a dictionary but I couldn't find some and i gave up.
Posted on 20 August 2023, 16:53 by:   Yefta     PM
Score +6
@Gads I think in chapter 4 or 5 in her bond story Helm ask to teach about what love is and Shikicum proceed to deep kiss and teach her about LOVE until morning. Shikicum really got great character development from try to refuse or avoid having some sex to Rizzler or NIKKE magnet even lead them into night battle 🤣

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