If you have any feedback please comment here or on my DeviantArt page https://ouo.io/3o6LTo

now it's starting to get interesting :)

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That's why I didn't want to post it here earlier. There's a lot more to come!

On my DeviantArt page I'll publish a page a day for this comic. I'm not sure though if I should do the same here.

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This seems to have a lot of the same issues your other comics have. I can only strongly recommend taking a few creative writing classes or at least reading some guides. When you do, a lot of the issues will become glaringly obvious to you.

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Thank you for checking out my other comics as well. Indeed, creative writing (or writing in general) is my biggest weakness. I have struggled with it all my life and I'm not sure I can improve but I'm certainly trying (though apparently mostly failing).

Last edited on 26 June 2023, 17:14.

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You can check Brandon Sanderson's creative writing course from BYU on his youtube channel, for example. It was quite engaging (even though i'm not a writer).

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Thank you for the recommendation, Nitram Nede. I'll check it out.

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