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Boooooooo, lame.

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can we ban/block this artist. this is awful tbh

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Hey @NGTVisualStudio, ignore the haters.. you got good stuff. Know that the time you dedicate to your comics is very appreciated. I'm not currently your contributor on Gumroad so I do read a lot of your stuff on here but I hope I can contribute sometime soon. Meanwhile, keep up the great work!

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The art itself is not awful. It's not great, not my favorite, BUT the lines are good and there's a style. It could be better, but the artist clearly has potential to get even better and he should certainly not give up on drawing, I genuinely think that would be terrible, in spite of what more cynical people might say.

But the format here is horrible as is. Repeating the exact same art for a half dozen frames feels cheap and awkward, arguably this could fit some sort of visual novel aesthetic, but even then I would say you need to clean it up into proper lines and then do proper coloring and shading, and at a minimum you should vary the facial expressions between frames (shape of the mouths, where they look at, maybe add hands doing gestures a times, etc, etc). The complete lack of background makes it feel cheaper as well, even just basic outlines of walls and furniture would do a lot to make these frames look a lot better and less lifeless.
Looking at other galleries, you do better there, actually cleaned art, fully shaded and colored, much more variety in poses, backgrounds sometimes, so clearly you can do much better than these repeated sketches. Those could all be better too, but just the same they show a lot of promise.

So, don't quit drawing, don't give up, you've got a good and stylized grasp on anatomy, you're already decent when you put in the effort, BUT, the way you upload/update all this stuff on here, that's annoying as shit to people, especially when you put very little effort into some of these. Focus more on your quality instead of your quantity.

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125 pages and... a blowjob? Hilarious. At that pace decent sex will require 1000 pages. Horrible.

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Why all the hate? This is like a visual novel, go check a CG and gonna find something like this, I like it, feels nostalgic.

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@granmanuel
Why don't you go and check a cg set yourself. Normal CGs despite being a single main image at least have variations. This one is just 1 image for 10-15 slides.

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